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ugh..

Shaking,
Cold.. �Angry..
Fist hurts
Wish the wall would hurt so I�m not alone.
Shaking,
Just to stop the fighting I put my feeling aside to make you happy,
People tell me I shouldn�t, people tell me it�s not right,
But all I want is for you to be happy,
Is it so wrong to be angry that you tell me not to tell my friends I love them when you do it?
Is it so wrong to be angry that you tell me not so smoke when you go and do it.?
Is it so wrong to be angry that I can�t talk to guys when you talk to girls?
Is it so wrong to be angry that I dropped all my friends for you and you jump to conclusions that I�m talking to other guys.
I need a smoke,
I need friends,
I need a life,
I need to relax,

Written by frenchfri

Published 25th Mar 2012 | Edited 26th Mar 2012

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ugh

lightbaron

25th Mar 2012 4:05pm

good... all art is honest(it shows if your full of shit, it shows if you half know what your talkin about, it shows if your experiencing something thats beyond the normal realm of communication.) that being said the more honest you are with yor art the more transparent it comes through...shacking?-thinkin u mighta meant shaking, but thats ok...sometimes if you just list out the cathartic release of emotions your feeling than the poetry sets itself up...keep writing grasshopper we wanna see it!!!