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untitled 8/12/22
collapsed moon
like lung convulsing
a stitched maw transition
swimming shallow brine eye
fucked hard exodus head
gaping raw
and red
turnstile dream egress
floral vein drained
wordly gone everythings
gore dancer lulls a pulse
all sleeper skin angel bone dead
lay still
gaping raw
and red
like lung convulsing
a stitched maw transition
swimming shallow brine eye
fucked hard exodus head
gaping raw
and red
turnstile dream egress
floral vein drained
wordly gone everythings
gore dancer lulls a pulse
all sleeper skin angel bone dead
lay still
gaping raw
and red
Published 12th Aug 2022
| Edited 19th Sep 2022
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13th Aug 2022 7:26pm
really nice. One I would have pressed play on it -had you recorded it.
Not sure it needs the head and dead but adds character, in which case i'd skip the "lay still". already sleeper
but is nit picking. Really well penned.
Not sure it needs the head and dead but adds character, in which case i'd skip the "lay still". already sleeper
but is nit picking. Really well penned.
14th Aug 2022 00:35am
14th Aug 2022 5:42pm
