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Kind
Apparently, saying
A kind
Word
In kind
Is
Just not acceptable;
I didn’t know
Or
Wasn’t aware,
Is all;
I am far colder
Than
You can imagine
&
Just…
Trying to be human
But…
Sometimes
Need
A bit of guidance,
Perhaps…
In dealing with your kind,
In kind.
Published 5th Aug 2022
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2022 00:53am
I love this piece, C.
Your beautiful admittance of being far colder than and 'trying to be human' hits fiercely hard with raw, honest wonder, to me. You've captured such a relatable and personal experience that I think all human beings feel at some point in their lives.
Gorgeously conveyed vulnerability without being preachy or accusatory it just is.
My heart aches in palpable solidarity at your last three or four lines.....
Big ol' bear hugs your way ✨
ʕづ•ᴥ•ʔづʕᴖᴥᴖᐢʔ
-x
Your beautiful admittance of being far colder than and 'trying to be human' hits fiercely hard with raw, honest wonder, to me. You've captured such a relatable and personal experience that I think all human beings feel at some point in their lives.
Gorgeously conveyed vulnerability without being preachy or accusatory it just is.
My heart aches in palpable solidarity at your last three or four lines.....
Big ol' bear hugs your way ✨
ʕづ•ᴥ•ʔづʕᴖᴥᴖᐢʔ
-x
5th Aug 2022 12:41pm
