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Peace Not War.
These black clouds will not fade
This is the last choice people have made
Bright was this dream hazed
Everything was trapped in a light maze
Universal love within our last gaze
Weaved by political games
To posses all to be gained
We felt no pain
Together our suffering erased
Total loss nothing retained
No longer blinded in the mind
No future
No Fire
No more Liars
Just Love survivors
This is the last choice people have made
Bright was this dream hazed
Everything was trapped in a light maze
Universal love within our last gaze
Weaved by political games
To posses all to be gained
We felt no pain
Together our suffering erased
Total loss nothing retained
No longer blinded in the mind
No future
No Fire
No more Liars
Just Love survivors
Published 23rd Mar 2012
| Edited 17th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2015 1:28pm
The rhyme does feel a little forced in this, however, I do like the sentiment behind it. You can feel that there is some passion in here trying to get out. Thank you for the read.
