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My secret
You are my secret desire
I dream of you
And think of the many ways
that I can pleasure
you in everything I do
from nose kisses
to adventures
On kitchen tables
To dine together
And taste each other’s lips
Like vintage wine
I say your name
With a delicious shiver
Sleep with your photographs
In my mind’s eye
Meet me tonight
in psychedelic skies
Though only in dreams
I may share
all my secret desires.
I dream of you
And think of the many ways
that I can pleasure
you in everything I do
from nose kisses
to adventures
On kitchen tables
To dine together
And taste each other’s lips
Like vintage wine
I say your name
With a delicious shiver
Sleep with your photographs
In my mind’s eye
Meet me tonight
in psychedelic skies
Though only in dreams
I may share
all my secret desires.
Published 23rd Mar 2012
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23rd Mar 2012 9:59am
26th Mar 2012 3:09am
This is really awesome. I like the meter. Check out my poem Purple about an LSD trip gone bad. Let me know how it is. I really think is quite good. Maybe you may be able to offer suggestions on how I can tweek it. It is in the drug category. I did this drug five times and had a bad trip the last time I did it in the 1980's. I don't do drugs or drink but still like to write poetry. Ia m going to read all of your poetry. You are great.
27th Mar 2012 1:34am
Thank you Arie...thats so kind of you. I will look you up. And thanks for the read and comments.
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2012 12:01pm
Aww, It's just so good Grace! I felt the heavy romance, sensuality-passion and love-i felt it all-and re-read it-and felt it again-Go Grace! Love your style!
23rd Mar 2012 3:40pm
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2012 12:40pm
Just like a confection....good to the last word!
Kitty
Kitty
23rd Mar 2012 3:40pm
23rd Mar 2012 1:49pm
How could be luky who'll met you in such of psykedelik skyes...
Nice verses, Grace!
Nice verses, Grace!
23rd Mar 2012 3:41pm
23rd Mar 2012 4:20pm
I love your style and Grace, this poem was no exception. very lovely the love
24th Mar 2012 8:27am
Glynis, love is as love does, one dream but may never touch. Sometimes. Thanks for reading and commenting.
23rd Mar 2012 4:51pm
Those three words have such power when surrounded with the right accompaniment, which they are.
The trouble with such dreams is the waking up, the crash back to reality:
Wanting, yearning and so. Beautiful poem Grace!
The trouble with such dreams is the waking up, the crash back to reality:
Wanting, yearning and so. Beautiful poem Grace!
24th Mar 2012 8:28am
Its better to love even in dreams than never to even have a single dream of love or loving, isn't it, MrAlptraum. Thank you for dropping by.
23rd Mar 2012 5:24pm
gracey I will always hold this very special as I do you and soon yes , maybe , who knows but never say never :)
24th Mar 2012 8:29am
In dreams, Paul, it can be so perfect. Reality is another thing. But as I said to love and be loved even in dreams can be a bonus.
28th Mar 2012 3:08am
28th Mar 2012 4:58am
Anonymous
13th Mar 2014 8:29pm
I always think that nose kisses are the most intimate of human exchanges. There's an underlying cheekiness ladled with so much intimate connection. I do love them.
It's hard to be under the weight of a constant muse. It can be a blessing as much as a curse however.
Thank you for the read.
It's hard to be under the weight of a constant muse. It can be a blessing as much as a curse however.
Thank you for the read.
13th Mar 2014 10:09pm
Thank you for reading and commenting, Missy. A blessing and a curse, yes...mostly just joy in expressing though.
