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OBSCURE ROSE
Precious petals, rare thorns
'Prohibited to Touch'
Ignoring such matters to get dramatic burns
Love that's shown that intrigues so much
Affection that is there when it hurts....
One's heart is a rose
A rose that opens red
Receiving what all life has to propose
'Frailty in Unity of it Soon Dead'
The new beginning of a prose
The prologue it creates in each stem
that is impossible to ignore
'Meraki Black Gem'
To define what's hidden in it's core
Smiling vines genuine
Cannot deny its dark essence
'The Black Butterfly'
Admiring her elegance
She is uniquely shy
But don't be deceived she is also dangerous
Water drops that look like diamonds
'Twinkles and Signals'
Life's mad laments
Many shattered many happy many individuals
Witnessing all that happens
'Her Midnight Dress'
That blooms at right full moon
Ready to impress and express
For that soul to take her doom
Relating and forgetting the rest
'Prohibited to Touch'
Ignoring such matters to get dramatic burns
Love that's shown that intrigues so much
Affection that is there when it hurts....
One's heart is a rose
A rose that opens red
Receiving what all life has to propose
'Frailty in Unity of it Soon Dead'
The new beginning of a prose
The prologue it creates in each stem
that is impossible to ignore
'Meraki Black Gem'
To define what's hidden in it's core
Smiling vines genuine
Cannot deny its dark essence
'The Black Butterfly'
Admiring her elegance
She is uniquely shy
But don't be deceived she is also dangerous
Water drops that look like diamonds
'Twinkles and Signals'
Life's mad laments
Many shattered many happy many individuals
Witnessing all that happens
'Her Midnight Dress'
That blooms at right full moon
Ready to impress and express
For that soul to take her doom
Relating and forgetting the rest
Written by
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
(WRITER LYRICIST ARTIST)
Published 10th Jul 2022
Author's Note
Wanted to try writing an emo type poem so thought about the black rose.
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Re. OBSCURE ROSE
10th Jul 2022 9:34am
Very interesting story from the past and present so revealing how something so beautiful can still be able to touch the depth of the heart and soul nicely composed dear poetess 🙏👊💪🦋
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10th Jul 2022 8:07pm
Thank you Stoney, it's my new one and love how it turned out. How are you, hope all is ok..
Re: Re. OBSCURE ROSE
10th Jul 2022 8:20pm
I'm glad that the many cancers that I have and had is in remission and my health is getting much better 🙏👊💪this cancer ain't no joke but I'm glad to be able to keep on pushing through the process and standing and fighting 🐺🙏💪👊🤗
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10th Jul 2022 8:44pm
AMEN.... For must never give up and carry the faith. It's hard I imagine and not easy to go through but you are definitely a strong man and God knows that. I'm happy to know your health is improving and keep pushing hard to live the beautiful life. God bless you all the way, Stoney.... 🙂🤗❤😇
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10th Jul 2022 11:04pm
Thank you for your encouragement and respect and support I deeply appreciate your kindness and love and respect and understanding as cancer is no joke but I am bless to have a strong support system in my life as I have been able to be blessed with my wife and daughter giving me the support and encouragement to keep on pushing through the storm 🐺🙏💪👊💖🤗
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11th Jul 2022 1:54am
And that's a beautiful thing, the ones you love there with you. That's what's most important.
Re: Re. OBSCURE ROSE
11th Jul 2022 6:53pm
You know what they say what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger than you are in the process of the storm 🙏👊💪😊
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12th Jul 2022 7:22pm
That's very true. Everyday is a killing process for me with all I do. My bf don't make it any easier but well that's how it is.
Re: Re. OBSCURE ROSE
12th Jul 2022 9:28pm
I understand that sometimes even those who are supposed to be our back bone can be a curse to you even as a bf yet things change in the process of GROWTH and understanding 🙏👊 of what is a real friend and isn't a friend yet it has a way of working itself out 🤗🙏🤗
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12th Jul 2022 10:05pm
Yes you nailed the right words and admire that. Yet it is true that things become a better understanding with growth when changes happen. It's matter of being patient and yes will work itself eventually. Thanks Stoney with great advise of wisdom. I hope you're day is going good, it is beautiful the day.
Re: Re. OBSCURE ROSE
14th Jul 2022 11:51pm
I found out that when we are learning how to forgive others and appreciate the moments of lessons that we have learned from understanding that all things change in life as the tides TURN into blessings with awaken within ourselves the opportunity to experience growth and DEVELOPMENT is when we see the difference between someone who understands the importance of being able to be a real friend and not a hinder to you life can be a beautiful thing 😉👊🙏
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15th Jul 2022 6:06am
Yeah I think that's true. Development is a huge challenge that defiantly takes time. Being patient is hard but guess it's worth after waiting and reaching the goal. Learning how to be a friend I think makes a huge difference. Some that don't experience something harder and takes I feel longer to understand things. Things are complicated but can get better if effort is made and love is shown too.
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15th Jul 2022 4:33pm
Exactly what you put in a relationship it is deposited into the heart and soul but yet what you don't put in the process of the relationship is withdrawal from the account of no deposit and no longer there is a reason for a return as that is how love goes in learning how to understand that sometimes things are not what they appear to be as one becomes awaken within a unjust dream for it is a challenge as we sometimes have to develop a more healthy environment to grow within a beautiful relationship with understanding made for you as well as learning how patients works out in the process of creating a new life 🙏👊💪🦋 the old saying goes sometimes the heart wants what it sees yet sometimes it's just out of reach as we sometimes have to LEARN to accept that we are only human beings. 🦋🙏👊👁
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10th Jul 2022 5:58pm
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