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Charge: Hitting reply
I don't need
a jury trial
to explain
my execution.
I understand
my own
fucking
culpability.
I understand that
idiocy
is not
enough
for a plea deal.
So pull the
goddamn trigger
and send
in the janitors.
a jury trial
to explain
my execution.
I understand
my own
fucking
culpability.
I understand that
idiocy
is not
enough
for a plea deal.
So pull the
goddamn trigger
and send
in the janitors.
Author's Note
YOU THERE! Fuck off! And keep fucking off until you've fucked off far enough... then, when you get there... fuck off some more.
Toodles.
(sips champagne from a slipper)
Toodles.
(sips champagne from a slipper)
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Re. Charge: Hitting reply
9th Jul 2022 1:06pm
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9th Jul 2022 3:02pm
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9th Jul 2022 1:27pm
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9th Jul 2022 3:03pm
Thanks. Rage makes my butt look good so I like to wear it whenever the weather is right.
Re. Charge: Hitting reply
9th Jul 2022 9:58pm
good afternoon dearest Betty I care a lot about you
I hope you don't let my poetry get to you
I say some dumb shit sometimes not really directed at anyone
but I always worry people I care for will take it personal
when I'm just venting or making shit up...
well anyway this is powerful...
I hope you don't let my poetry get to you
I say some dumb shit sometimes not really directed at anyone
but I always worry people I care for will take it personal
when I'm just venting or making shit up...
well anyway this is powerful...
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Re: Re. Charge: Hitting reply
9th Jul 2022 10:13pm
Sweetie, it’s not to you. I pinky swear. I think you are a dear soul and don’t think that way, ok?
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2022 11:24pm
I don’t want to be one of these bourgeois poetry cunts… but the full stops in this is where it’s at. I love how they hammer home home each individual stanza, each individual thought. They almost come across like angry text messages and I freakin’ loved the direct nature of that.
That strong narrative in repeating “I understand” twice is powerful. Sometimes, we don’t need other people’s inputs. We are powerful in our intuition and our authority. People need to fkn realise that too sometimes.
Charge in the title really got to me too. So many images running through when I read it — electrical charge, a battering ram, dynamite — all of them add so much boom to the imagery.
Also laughing my tits off at the authors note. That genuinely feels like something I would say. 😂
Cheers and stuff for this one.
-M
That strong narrative in repeating “I understand” twice is powerful. Sometimes, we don’t need other people’s inputs. We are powerful in our intuition and our authority. People need to fkn realise that too sometimes.
Charge in the title really got to me too. So many images running through when I read it — electrical charge, a battering ram, dynamite — all of them add so much boom to the imagery.
Also laughing my tits off at the authors note. That genuinely feels like something I would say. 😂
Cheers and stuff for this one.
-M
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Re: Re. Charge: Hitting reply
9th Jul 2022 11:32pm
God yes. Thank you for the incredible r/r. The explanatory process is such a bloviated thing.
I get it. Or, I don’t. Either way.
Glad you liked the comment. I’m still laughing my tits off about intestinal balloon animals. Fuck.
Thanks!
I get it. Or, I don’t. Either way.
Glad you liked the comment. I’m still laughing my tits off about intestinal balloon animals. Fuck.
Thanks!
Re. Charge: Hitting reply
10th Jul 2022 2:47pm
Dear B,
Standing O and wild applause!
🥂
🚬
F*cker’s can all take a hike to shut f*ck mountain! Such a great way to begin my day. Thank you! H🌷
Standing O and wild applause!
🥂
🚬
F*cker’s can all take a hike to shut f*ck mountain! Such a great way to begin my day. Thank you! H🌷
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Re: Re. Charge: Hitting reply
10th Jul 2022 2:50pm
SHUT FUCK MOUNTAIN?!? Yes! Yes! God yes! I wonder if they have a tram?
That, right there, was the shit.
Thanks for the energy, you lovely bit of wonderfulness.
That, right there, was the shit.
Thanks for the energy, you lovely bit of wonderfulness.