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alone
Nobody knows the real me, how could that be?
I keep all my feelings bottle up
Just trying to stay atop
I smile to hide my tears and fears
The pain I just can't bare
I cry at night cause I'm afraid of this thing called life
I made some not so good decisions
That has only clouded my vision
All I can do is drop to my knees and pray that God gives me peace
I keep all my feelings bottle up
Just trying to stay atop
I smile to hide my tears and fears
The pain I just can't bare
I cry at night cause I'm afraid of this thing called life
I made some not so good decisions
That has only clouded my vision
All I can do is drop to my knees and pray that God gives me peace
Published 21st Mar 2012
| Edited 6th Apr 2012
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5th Apr 2012 9:41pm
You tap into a feeling that we all in some form deal with. I think there may be a typo, "bare' instead of "bear". Also if you are talking about a plural amount, it should be "decisions".
6th Apr 2012 4:42am
Thank you for noticing my mistakes. I changed them :-) I really appreciate you taking the time to read & comment
6th Apr 2012 6:25am
Not really asking much---your writing is very easy to get into. I know in my case spotting errors in other peoples words is easier then self-correction.
