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Rivers of Rain
A smile once lived here
Now rivers of rain
Once a happy women now sadly insane
Blood shot eyes that are weary and cold
Sit, please listen while my story is told
Pleasure took me but lust over came
A deeper obsession than love or pain
The weakest part of my soul was burned
Two steps backwards and one wrong turn
Rivers of rain that became oceans of sand
Gave up my life for the lust of a man
Now three seeds i boarder
and one soul to protect
And still she runs to her lord
But not yet to repent
Rivers, oh rivers and oceans of sand
The weakest part of my soul
was lusting for that man.
Now rivers of rain
Once a happy women now sadly insane
Blood shot eyes that are weary and cold
Sit, please listen while my story is told
Pleasure took me but lust over came
A deeper obsession than love or pain
The weakest part of my soul was burned
Two steps backwards and one wrong turn
Rivers of rain that became oceans of sand
Gave up my life for the lust of a man
Now three seeds i boarder
and one soul to protect
And still she runs to her lord
But not yet to repent
Rivers, oh rivers and oceans of sand
The weakest part of my soul
was lusting for that man.
Published 6th Jul 2022
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7th Jul 2022 00:14am
7th Jul 2022 5:25pm
When the lust for a man takes over it feels impossible to separate. Especially when you know it will cause nothing but pain to stay and painful to leave.
Excellent read.
Love the ending.
Excellent read.
Love the ending.
11th Jul 2022 00:46am
Dear S,
Lessons learned is right. The heart wants what the heart wants and there seems to be no reasoning with it, for me anyway. I really enjoyed the meter and rhyming and story telling of this write. Amazing poem. H🌷
Lessons learned is right. The heart wants what the heart wants and there seems to be no reasoning with it, for me anyway. I really enjoyed the meter and rhyming and story telling of this write. Amazing poem. H🌷
5th Aug 2022 1:15am
"Now three seeds I boarder
and one soul to protect."
Slight mystery here. I wanna guess but had better not.
and one soul to protect."
Slight mystery here. I wanna guess but had better not.
27th Aug 2023 2:36am
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