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Thinking Crescent Moon
thinking crescent moon
it is partial
every moment it grooms
your hold onto me
I devour and consume
my strength waxes
as your womanhood
relents to the darkside of it
your long hair
fairness flowing
fragrant perfume
bodies to full
our celestials
letting go of what was before
in the knowing
of the course of things
unseen sphere
uniting in the full light
of what shall resume
it is partial
every moment it grooms
your hold onto me
I devour and consume
my strength waxes
as your womanhood
relents to the darkside of it
your long hair
fairness flowing
fragrant perfume
bodies to full
our celestials
letting go of what was before
in the knowing
of the course of things
unseen sphere
uniting in the full light
of what shall resume
Published 5th Jul 2022
Author's Note
inspiration from celestial observation before the clouds took over
© CanisInk-Untis 2022
© CanisInk-Untis 2022
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5th Jul 2022 1:29pm
Is it called strength when u show up at various locations while I use wifi? Like yesterday?
5th Jul 2022 1:44pm
well that depends:
if it is a strong wifi signal, then thats' strength
if it is a weak wifi signal, then thats' weakness
if it is a strong wifi signal, then thats' strength
if it is a weak wifi signal, then thats' weakness
15th Jul 2022 10:51pm
Very feminine energy isn't it? I feel that from your words. Nicely penned ink drops.
17th Jul 2022 10:25am
hi thanks for the list add
but i dont feel as you do
- this piece is actually about masculine energy complementing it,
bit like dark to light
but i dont feel as you do
- this piece is actually about masculine energy complementing it,
bit like dark to light
17th Jul 2022 6:04pm
ahh of course the author always knows best, and reading late at night doesn't help my insights I guess. lol welcome. yin yang rocks.
18th Jul 2022 3:56am
no probs LB
thanks again for stopping by
if I could share with you that this piece was fairly spontaneous (that im very unused to) and after drink and piping some tobacco,
and my immeadiate impression from the scene in the nightsky was of a woman that i was involved with holding onto me, drawing on my reserves of strength, for security and stability, and this shaped the rest of it there and then,
appreciate your experience and reading
thanks again for stopping by
if I could share with you that this piece was fairly spontaneous (that im very unused to) and after drink and piping some tobacco,
and my immeadiate impression from the scene in the nightsky was of a woman that i was involved with holding onto me, drawing on my reserves of strength, for security and stability, and this shaped the rest of it there and then,
appreciate your experience and reading
9th Aug 2022 1:49am
Celestial observation can be so beautiful, you can get lost in it. I think clouds are as well. ;) This definitely has a yin and yang feel to me. Capturing different energies of masculine and feminine and how they combine, how they need each other. I really love the imagery from the moon, stars, darkness, and light, long flowing hair... Really enjoyed it CI.
9th Aug 2022 5:35am
