Chaos

Wow... powerful write... well penned dear poet...

Thank you!  I was a bit motivated, and still a little buzzed.  Lol.

Happy 4th!  

The mixture of sex and violence here is very potent, and potently expressed. The poem is a little long and narrow in its format for my taste, but those bits that my eyes lingered on are worth lingering on. There’s real pain and pathos here.

Actually, violence is not appropriate in this or ever in anything I write or do when it pertains to a woman.  Aggression, perhaps.  Because they are as well.  The angst, the passion, etc.   There's a difference from violence.  

I'm glad that you found bits worth lingering on.  That's a plus!  

Thank you kindly, for the summation.

I love the venom
Polite doesn't work when you need to deliver the message
Rough and ready Styx
Raise my glass
Salute

BIG SMACKDOWN

LIKE

There's always that one person that just riles us in every way good, and every way bad.  
Me and her have always been that.  Lol.  We are the perfect storm.  

I barely remembered even writing this!  Lol.  It was like the aftershocks, of her texts in the afterwards.  

Your reply is awesome!  Thanks!  

Woww a most creatively expressed awesome poem on the hate love cycle, the separation sentiments and longing. Is she playing hard to get, or is the love hard to forget yet there's ambivalence.  Kudos for this bit sarcastic masterpiece!!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Thank you for your most accurate view.  
And, hate is such a strong, evil word.  It should never exist.  It consumes too much time and energy from positive things.

I will definitely go seek out your own poetic pieces.  I always look towards my peers, when they take the time to do the same for me.  

Hi Styx,

The collision course of the ex's.
You know the song - All my Ex's live in Texas. Well yeah. LOL

This is explosive like dynamite.  Lots of tension and angst.
You wrote this while being buzzed?  
That's just insane. LOL
In a good way:)

Happy 4th!!!

From now on, for July 4th, I'm saying "Happy Bang Day!".  Lol.
Because it sounds incredibly awesome!  

Yes, I was still under the influence of alcohol, and all the smoldering decadence that had transpired.  Lol.   No regrets.  We're grown ups.  
I know very well my levels of tolerable alcohol consumption.  There's a plateau that I reach, but don't overdo, lest I fall off the edge.  

Besides, how many writers write while smoking and drinking?  It used to be the standard!  
Along with candlelight maybe, to focus the thoughts.   It works!

Enjoy your holiday!   Yay days off!  

Until another stand off
daring one another's chaos
I will kill you
with my cock
I will strangle
every other name
you ever said
I will be
tonight's instead

This is poetic Gold, yes Gold I says…

Ending stanzas is strong as well, enjoyed this one Styx

Okay, we are officially bro's.  I have a pic somewhere of my hand being eerily swollen like yours!   So writing is now only one of the things we have in common .  Lol.

Similarly, when I read your stuff, I feel like we are on the same plane of seeing things.   I can relate and truly enjoy your material.  

And thank you, fine sir.  For your comment.  

I am chaos, and you are plenty good to me. But you owe me more still. ;) Chaos is insatiable... Making history with each new fuck. Getting rid of hate between the legs. You just keep getting bigger, perhaps it's to make me feel small. It's a tight fit, but you make it fit in the end. Salty friction on the lips flowing like tequila with lime. Blowing up your mind as you kill me crashing into me with force. I will break your bones still, no need for help with that. Chaos of movement, what else is needed. It says plenty... it says everything.

If I was in bad shape, I'd probably be having a heart attack right about now!   How long do I owe you?!  Hell with it, I'm getting you a puppy!   Then we're even!  
  That's it, you're trying to kill me.  I feel it.  Lol.  But nah, I'm good for a few more rounds!  My stubbornness kicks in and it's on like Donkey Kong!  

Do u own a woman on this site?

Own?

I didn't look up your country (the flag identifier), but in America, owning people has been illegal for a very long time.    Who wants to own someone?  There's no manual, no warranty, nada.  
Borrowed, young sir, is good.  With their permission, obviously.  It's a trade-off thing.

Own woman like she is yours, pussy 4 u only, love 4 u only, not own like things u buy from market, sorry sorry. Sorry,born in Indonesia, not where living now tho. The woman is such complicated, on this site the blonde sexy gym woman asked to be owned, and walked like pet, but we just borrow them? Confused

Perhaps you need to speak with sexy gym woman directly.  

I'm just a janitor.  Mopping up messes, changing light bulbs from all the ideas in our heads going boom!   Etc.
Basically, I'm just here for utility purposes.  

"Pussy4Uonly"  When a lady shows up in here with that screen name, I'm definitely nabbing her for myself.  It's everything I always wanted!  

Well, that and an extended warranty for my vehicle.