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Floating
Time
As we float
On the essence
Of a ticking clock
Seemingly immortal
Our effervescence
Glowing, and glowering
Into the strange reality
Of an immortal
Subterfuge
And then we realise
The stark reality
OF life
by Jemia
As we float
On the essence
Of a ticking clock
Seemingly immortal
Our effervescence
Glowing, and glowering
Into the strange reality
Of an immortal
Subterfuge
And then we realise
The stark reality
OF life
by Jemia
Published 11th Jun 2022
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11th Jun 2022 2:25am
Good stuff. I did not find the key you asked me to find. But I wish you luck with your publisher. Regards, Robert.
11th Jun 2022 1:49pm
glad you liked it, don't worry about the like button. your complimentary comments are more important, and that you've taken time out to make them, thank you x
