deepundergroundpoetry.com
Don’t know the song name🤷🏻♂️
What is it about you???
That suddenly I sit and I’m…
Ahem
Sometimes I fuck you in my head
I let you touch me when I’m lonely in my bed
I wanna scream but hold my breath…
That suddenly I sit and I’m…
Ahem
Sometimes I fuck you in my head
I let you touch me when I’m lonely in my bed
I wanna scream but hold my breath…
Published 6th Jun 2022
Author's Note
If someone knows this song lmk the name…
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3
reading list entries 1
comments 1
reads 306
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
6th Jun 2022 5:53pm
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
This, what you wrote, if definitely songwriting material.
But as a lyricist, you take me into a mood, and leave me there to absorb.
For a minute or 4 or 5.
This is like a half a minute or one minute, in kind words: it powerful, but it’s way too short (at least for me).
Please remember: I’m not the yardstick for cooperations.
But I guess I won’t be the only one who’ll think this is good but way to short,
Please give it a thought. And let me know what you have in mind.
If you think your rhymes and reasoning are too personal, please PM.
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
This, what you wrote, if definitely songwriting material.
But as a lyricist, you take me into a mood, and leave me there to absorb.
For a minute or 4 or 5.
This is like a half a minute or one minute, in kind words: it powerful, but it’s way too short (at least for me).
Please remember: I’m not the yardstick for cooperations.
But I guess I won’t be the only one who’ll think this is good but way to short,
Please give it a thought. And let me know what you have in mind.
If you think your rhymes and reasoning are too personal, please PM.
Kind regards, Gus
