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Some Summer Night’s Dream
The night has paths
Of flight
Through the air
Like
Worm holes
Where
Particles
Of
Light
Move about
In fire
Flies
That flitter
&
Flutter
From
There to here
Here
To
There
Published 2nd Jun 2022
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2nd Jun 2022 1:45pm
2nd Jun 2022 9:45pm
2nd Jun 2022 4:43pm
Brings back memories of summer as a kid in Ohio. As the sun was setting the fireflies would start their show and I had my old Hellmann's mayonnaise jar with tiny holes poked in the metal lid, some grass and a stick inside; cupping them and putting them in their new 'home'... lol... Man, they were pretty in there....
I miss them, no fireflies in FL!
😔
Such a beautiful nostalgic joy to read!
🌹-⚡ - 🪰
B
I miss them, no fireflies in FL!
😔
Such a beautiful nostalgic joy to read!
🌹-⚡ - 🪰
B
2nd Jun 2022 9:48pm
That is such an idyllic scene that
you paint B...
This sort of came to me in this
sweeping vision...
Felt as much as seen...
Connected to the natural world...
Just like a supernatural phenomenon...
It struck me on such a profound,
spiritual/intellectual level...
Like noetic lightning...
I...
Was wondering how I might
articulate such a thing...
But as I wrote...
It seemed to mirror the phenomenon...
I am just very grateful that
this resonated with you...
you paint B...
This sort of came to me in this
sweeping vision...
Felt as much as seen...
Connected to the natural world...
Just like a supernatural phenomenon...
It struck me on such a profound,
spiritual/intellectual level...
Like noetic lightning...
I...
Was wondering how I might
articulate such a thing...
But as I wrote...
It seemed to mirror the phenomenon...
I am just very grateful that
this resonated with you...
Anonymous
2nd Jun 2022 8:15pm
Like bluevelvete said, this is quite nostalgic. Well done.
2nd Jun 2022 9:49pm
