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Can't sleep
Here comes again,
like in a dream,
maddening pain
and silent scream,
I want to run
but can't escape
what I have done.
And the night's cape
that feels like bars
turns counting sheep.
in counting scars.
like in a dream,
maddening pain
and silent scream,
I want to run
but can't escape
what I have done.
And the night's cape
that feels like bars
turns counting sheep.
in counting scars.
Published 1st Jun 2022
| Edited 2nd Jun 2022
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1st Jun 2022 6:27pm
Dear S,
Amazing write. The scenario you’ve painted in words hits home like a gut punch of reality and that feeling of being stuck and unable to run or even hide. The closing lines are stellar. Excellent write. H 🌷
Amazing write. The scenario you’ve painted in words hits home like a gut punch of reality and that feeling of being stuck and unable to run or even hide. The closing lines are stellar. Excellent write. H 🌷
1st Jun 2022 7:16pm
2nd Jun 2022 4:59pm
There is honest vulnerability to your writing, which to me is the greatest quality one can express. Thank you for being here and sharing this with us.
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