The Power of Being Shower Fucked!

This is such a hot and wet poem, very erotic. The rhyme is also great, enjoyed reading it.

Thank you, Mystery Poet!

I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. It was hot and wet in the shower too! : )

........I've never done drugs in my whole lyfe!  Seriously!  But, If I ever did LSD or Angel Dust, (as many of my musical friends have), this poem has that certain surreal, exaggerated image and color in it's sensory exposition.  This is like hearing "Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds" or "Strawberry Letter 23"  You feel this poem, you see this poem-you experience this poem.  This almost got me off without even touching myself!  LOL  Descriptive pictures- "My smooth milk chocolate body is soaking wet
My big dark brown nipples are still erect" and
"Thrusting your dick in and out of my pussy, causing me to holler".  My, my, my.  Just "fuck me now precious". One of your better poems.  Concise, to the point but filled with sensations that just hit you back to back like a really good fuck!

Got to Like This One......

Thank you, Music!

Just when I thought I lost my erotic touch, you hit me with such an awesome comment.  I was just playing around with this piece, to see if I still had my skills.  I'm glad my poem was able to make your nature rise.  Love making is always good, because of the intimacy...........however, there's nothing like a really good fuck!  ; )

Lost your touch?  Have you looked at your read count since you posted this?  It's been up a little less than 48 hours and over 200 reads?  Girl you lookin' at royalty!  LOL  You got a following ; )

LOL!  I guess your right.  Actually, it's been exactly 24hrs.  I guess I better keep the poems coming.  It's 2 months since I post a poem. Thanks for your kind and encouraging words!

that before i go
i have 2 cents worth of flow
about licking you slow
before you enjoy the dick so
get ready to curl you toe
& just sit back & enjoy the goodest show....lol

That before you go  
There's something that you must know  
Before you start licking me slow down below  
 
You have to serve me better than my previous man  
Chocolate melts in your mouth not in your hands  
You might want to think twice before pulling off your pants  
 
If you don't have the goodest show  
I promise I will let everyone know  
 
Just for the record, I know I'm a mess  
One taste of my Chocolick will prove that I'm the best  
You're more than welcome to give Chocolick test  
Don't be shocked when find out I taste better than the rest!  
; )  
 

see now why did you take it there
i will pound chocolik free of her dispair
& she will melt nearly everywhere
on the bed on the floor in the shower & on the chair
& deric will handle her with care
because he really Loves to share
pleasure when your skin is bare
& my tongue is excellent too...i must be fair...;)

Brother Goodest, Let me tell ya'

She taste great!  Less Filling.
She'll have you on your back.
She'll give your dick a killing

Chocolick and Chocolate drop
Always work in pairs
Nothing has ever been this good
She'll erase your mind, I swear

Words that drip like honey
Pussy flows like cream
Slip it to her slowly
You'll think you're in a dream

To the promise land
That's where you'll want to go
But brother just remember
She likes to "knock" at your back door

LOL (Too much wine tonight)

well we dont do back doors....lmao.....& i wish i could drink tonight....but my stomach is so messed up....

Ohhh, Music!

Yes, you had too much wine!  That was our little secret about me knocking at the back door.  LOL!

You know I had to take it there!  
I love your response. ; )

LMAO.........Goodest read da' poem too!

i remember it so well....i think chocolate drop was fresh here back then....lol

CHOCOLATE DROP,

If that was just 'playing with the piece' I would like to compliment you on nice hand work ; ) I say turn on the shower head and let the good times flow! From now on being sent to the showers will not be a bad thing! Play Ball!!!

tornado  

Thank you for the great compliment, tornado!

I'm glad you enjoyed my hand job.  Ooops I meant to say "work"! ; )

Great poem; you get in there with the words, so vividly give the reader a mental picture, and wrap it up so effortlessly. You are on your way to becoming a Maya Angelou!

Thank you for the lovely comment, JAZZMANOR!

I try to give my readers a mental picture.  It makes it much mod interesting.  I'm glad you enjoyed this write.  : )

this poem is excellent!!! super erotic it hit the spot! I also love the title:)

Thanks, jigg82!

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and title.  More importantly, I'm glad it hit the spot! ;)