Back Door

It's too hot :) I'm lovin' it ;)

Thankyou...Im glad you enjoyed it.

What a great poem,  so erotic

thank you sweety...I have a bit of an imagination! LOL

You are one bad chick. And this is one good poem. Your effortless use of rhyme, the recurring 'ore' end-line rhyme, really drives this, giving it an urgency and rhythm that underlies the highly risquee content. It's just a little shocking and though I'm no prude I think I'd veil the message here just a little, leave some ambiguity and intrigue to complete the (very) sexy effect. It reminds me of an oldie of mine which I shall look out in your honour but not before I've bored you with my usual edit by way of suggestion. (Another) Bad (Good) Write!

Come in is the answer
so please.... knock!

This is...what you're looking for
Here I am
Naked... on the floor
On all fours...
Begging you...to enter through
My..Back Door
See... I dont think you really
Understand...
this is something
I need...every inch of you
Filling the inside of me

Use your fingers to explore
Then give it to me deeply
till I feel it in my core

I need you to rock me
So dont knock softly
I need you to make me
Beg for more

Give me what I want
Dont stop...
Pop my lock until
My jaw drops
and I lay gasping
on my floor

Be greedy,and agressive
Teach my naughty ass a lesson
Make me scream ...
"This ass is yours...yours.... yours..!"
So here I am ...
Hot... ready... and waiting
On all fours
Baby please take me..
Please cum into ...
My Back Door.
  

Red.... You all ready know what kind of imagination I have so imagine where this piece came from........
And as always thank you for the critique...also I never get bored of your responces... I look forward to it!

.....recall all my old Bessie Smith, Sophie Tucker, Big mama Thorton and a few others.  Such risque words.  Such a turn on.  More than a thought-I can feel the need, smell the heat an lust in the room and hear the sounds of the act in each word.  Very vivid, your request.  Great write!  Hence my reply : )

I abosultely love this erotic poem. There seems like an extreme urgent desire to ge ass fucked here, and it is penned down in a sensous way. Enjoyed reading it.

thank you...I like tackling the taboo side of myself...and life.
Thankyou for reading!