Fuck Your Fruity Beer

Poetry I can fucking believe in !
Bukowski would be proud
Poetspeak approved

SQUASH THAT BEER CAN WITH YOUR TWAT LIKE  
( BIG LIKE )

LOL
winning commentary, sir!!
Thanks, I knew you'd approve.
❤️k

Dear K,

I can’t even. When the level of reality is attained so brilliantly as is this poem what’s a girl to say? Except “give me a fucking beer and shit can the fruit!”
Out. Standing. Write! H🌷

Hell yeah. Let's go get drunk, girlfriend!

Thanks for the praise. 😊 I lap it up like a yummy stout.
❤️k

Just brilliant. I hate fruity beer. Wheat beer is acceptable on a hot day. :p
And lite beer... yuck. Why bother... just drink some water... :)
"match my darkest thoughts, one that smells like sweat and tastes like earth"...
I could definitely feel that in my mouth... ;) lingering like a bitter memory of discipline
and dirty knees. Oh boy the thoughts and memories going through my head. lol
Very distracting. :P 🍻

You are awesome. LOVE IT! ;)

I aim to distract! Very gratifying to know I succeeded. Thank you!
Cheers 🍻
❤️k

HA!!!I feel the exact same way about vodka. Eff the flavors and give the raw uncut.

Vodka is danger for me, but yes, I'd rather know the burn I'm getting into... 🔥
Thanks for stopping by for a sip.
❤️k

I want a beer that can
match my darkest thoughts,
one that smells like sweat
and tastes like earth
and smacks me in the neurons

Just Yes!

Short sharp and a cross to the jaws

That's right. If I'm drinking, I'm probably not looking for gentle.
Thanks for stopping by & leaving your mark.
❤️k

That 2nd stanza though, awesome!

LJ

Glad you liked it! 😊
Thanks so much for stopping by.
❤️k

Ha Ha love this BT, esp the close what an image !! I am old enough to have been in the brewing industry long enough  to witness the marketer's wet dream of alchopops and the barrage of berry beers that followed, give me a roll up and a pint Brown and Mild from a bar who's food menu was crisps and nuts and I'll show you a good time. Best Keith

Ah, that sounds like the perfect pleasure. 😊
Thanks for your thoughts on my little rant here!
❤️k

Cheers, sistah!  I got burnt the other day ordering a beer (I like to try beers I haven't had before) that tasted like mouthwash.

I love your username too.

Oh, that's the worst!! Sometimes the names are cryptic, if there's no description I'll always ask. 'Cause if I'm looking for a porter and I get mouthwash.... everyone will be unhappy!

As for my name... I guess I was feeling melodramatic & conflicted about myself that day. You know, like a poet or something. Thanks!
❤️k