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Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
Take me gently, entering two-thirds,
Do not let the rally finish, tease, inciting.
Push the time of spasms in a tight, narrow cage,
So that I tremble like a doe, squeezing the flesh ...
So that I choke from the sweet torture,
But cling to meet, letting your manhood go deeper.
Harder... faster, bringing me to the brink.
And he, so that at the peak, poured out with excess,
So that I would get drunk to my heart’s content,
I’m intoxicated on you, from taking you inside ...
Do not let the rally finish, tease, inciting.
Push the time of spasms in a tight, narrow cage,
So that I tremble like a doe, squeezing the flesh ...
So that I choke from the sweet torture,
But cling to meet, letting your manhood go deeper.
Harder... faster, bringing me to the brink.
And he, so that at the peak, poured out with excess,
So that I would get drunk to my heart’s content,
I’m intoxicated on you, from taking you inside ...
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Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
17th May 2022 9:06pm
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18th May 2022 00:07am
Thanks Ron!, I am so happy you liked it. ;) Perhaps I need to pick up my broken filter and try to do that puzzle again, but never succeeded before so I suppose it's hopeless. :p Still, dirty minds have to stick together. ;) xo 💖🔥
Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
18th May 2022 2:05am
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18th May 2022 2:50am
Absolutely yes! I have needs so my doctor must always be on call. And a thorough physical is always essential. I can wear a nurse's outfit. ;) xo 💖🔥
Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
18th May 2022 2:40am
Just what the doctor ordered orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing
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18th May 2022 3:11am
Oh yes! That is the only kind of doctor for me. Orgasmic bliss over and over again is absolutely essential for my mental and physical health. ;) xo 💖🔥
Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
18th May 2022 3:21am
Caged
Taken out for use
She's at his mercy
All she can do is demand and receive more pleasure...
Great picture
BIG LIKE
Taken out for use
She's at his mercy
All she can do is demand and receive more pleasure...
Great picture
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
18th May 2022 2:12pm
I may have had help with the bars. :p Always eagerly waiting to be taken out of the cage for use. Those dark manifestations of 'his mercy' are so very exciting always residing in my mind, needing. Ready to accept any and all things to come. Love the BIG LIKE. xo 💖🔥
Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
18th May 2022 7:26pm
What a wonderful metaphor for the inexhaustible intimacy of interpersonal conversation, the narrowness of confining banality, the slippery-when-wet feeling of the mind's finally being enabled to speak what the heart has been hiding behind the immodesty of overwhelmingly naked acceptance.
This is the kind of conversation that ends with, "It's been a pleasure talking to you. Let's do it again some time."
This is the kind of conversation that ends with, "It's been a pleasure talking to you. Let's do it again some time."
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Re: Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
I really love your insight turtle, you see so much. I so need that inexhaustible intimacy in all of its many forms. Slippery when wet indeed. :p Mind, body, and soul. Stripping away all the hiding places of the heart and modesty, enraptured by that naked acceptance.
Or possibly it ends without words but with a look that says we must do this again... and again... ;) xo 💖🔥
Or possibly it ends without words but with a look that says we must do this again... and again... ;) xo 💖🔥
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18th May 2022 11:20pm
Re: Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
19th May 2022 00:38am
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19th May 2022 4:07am
Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
19th May 2022 3:07am
Holy hell. Just.Holy.Hell.
Lol. Lingerie is a billion dollar business for a reason. Because of what it eludes to, the allure and the enticement. Like this poem of yours. It's the kind of Venus fly trap that men die for willingly. Lol.
You quite skillfully dressed this in lingerie.
Excellent.
Lol. Lingerie is a billion dollar business for a reason. Because of what it eludes to, the allure and the enticement. Like this poem of yours. It's the kind of Venus fly trap that men die for willingly. Lol.
You quite skillfully dressed this in lingerie.
Excellent.
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19th May 2022 5:30pm
Oh I love Holy Hell. :) You have really brought a smile to my face. ;)
And I do love lingerie, how it looks, how it feels, but much more importantly what it does to someone else. ;) Increasing the allure, and enticement, that strong desire and need to explore what is underneath completely... Absolutely love that carnal lust and it's building, all of it's manifestations... To look just so ... for someone else. Love it!
And I really love that you can see the lingerie. It sets the scene for what's next. ;) xo 💖🔥
And I do love lingerie, how it looks, how it feels, but much more importantly what it does to someone else. ;) Increasing the allure, and enticement, that strong desire and need to explore what is underneath completely... Absolutely love that carnal lust and it's building, all of it's manifestations... To look just so ... for someone else. Love it!
And I really love that you can see the lingerie. It sets the scene for what's next. ;) xo 💖🔥
Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
19th May 2022 2:38pm
Hello K,
You are not only sweet and sexy. you also know how to feel and evoke sensation and express in words. I am sure you may be as much sensational and sexual as you are in your writings.
Love you for your expression of beyond imagination.
Kiss
KS
You are not only sweet and sexy. you also know how to feel and evoke sensation and express in words. I am sure you may be as much sensational and sexual as you are in your writings.
Love you for your expression of beyond imagination.
Kiss
KS
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19th May 2022 5:35pm
Aw KS you have really touched my heart with your comment. You also know how to evoke sensation with your words. :) My feelings can be quite intense and the expression of them I have been told can be felt strongly by others. I can only hope to be sensational and it makes me very happy if someone sees me that way. :) And I am definitely a very sexual being. 🔥
I so appreciate the love. Thank you. xo 💖🔥
I so appreciate the love. Thank you. xo 💖🔥
Re: Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
19th May 2022 9:53pm
Hello Sweet K,
Thank you for your sweet and intimate reply. Your words filled with fire of sensation fire me up and my passion overflows. Well, if we have strong feelings our sensations are going to be intense in real encounter. If we are emotional the words may flow with right from the heart down to the secret chamber with high degree of sensuality. I wish I was around to share those sensational moment. It is about sex its about the intensity of sex that takes us deep in the abyss.
Love and hugs,
KS
Thank you for your sweet and intimate reply. Your words filled with fire of sensation fire me up and my passion overflows. Well, if we have strong feelings our sensations are going to be intense in real encounter. If we are emotional the words may flow with right from the heart down to the secret chamber with high degree of sensuality. I wish I was around to share those sensational moment. It is about sex its about the intensity of sex that takes us deep in the abyss.
Love and hugs,
KS
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Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
20th May 2022 00:45am
Returned to the cesspool I see
Couldn't keep away
You're back and working the bar like a cowboy western in the wild west
If a buy you a few whiskies I'll bet anything could happen.
Counting on it
Dig your needs Kristina
I'm thirsty I need a drink ....
Couldn't keep away
You're back and working the bar like a cowboy western in the wild west
If a buy you a few whiskies I'll bet anything could happen.
Counting on it
Dig your needs Kristina
I'm thirsty I need a drink ....
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Re: Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
20th May 2022 2:17am
I got drunk and stumbled back in.
Now I am lost...
Somehow I ended up working the bar.
Oh boy, with me anything can happen always. lol
I aim to please.
Such intense needs. :p
The bar is open. What would you like? ;) xo 💖🔥
Now I am lost...
Somehow I ended up working the bar.
Oh boy, with me anything can happen always. lol
I aim to please.
Such intense needs. :p
The bar is open. What would you like? ;) xo 💖🔥
Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
27th Jun 2022 9:32pm
This is one of those write many of us will come back to "read" multiple times.
>:-)
Hot write.
>:-)
Hot write.
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Re: Re. Spasms in a tight, narrow cage...
27th Jun 2022 9:54pm
I really love coming over and over again. I mean I really love when someone comes over and over again. :p Multiples is the best. I love writing and reading multiples. Like you said I like burning things too. lol xo 💖🔥