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Primping - A poem by my daughter
I have lotion to smooth my sun-touched skin
Sweet scents to fill the air
I tend to each toe very carefully
Then brush to straighten my hair
There’s so much to do before tonight
When my love sweeps me off my feet
I’ll brush and floss and gargle a bit
For my love my mouth will taste sweet
Sweet scents to fill the air
I tend to each toe very carefully
Then brush to straighten my hair
There’s so much to do before tonight
When my love sweeps me off my feet
I’ll brush and floss and gargle a bit
For my love my mouth will taste sweet
Published 16th May 2022
Author's Note
This little rhyme from my daughter made me laugh. She does like to primp but so do I.
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Poem captions the picture well. I too believe in freshening up before dates of any nature. Didn't Solomon in his famous Song write approvingly of sweet tasting mouths?
19th May 2022 11:49am
Yes she does take dental hygiene seriously. What a blessing her smile is to me.
Your daughter did well with this. It is right that ladies should be into primping. Those legs and feet are capturing my imagination!
19th May 2022 11:52am
Her legs have captured the imagination of several men in the last couple of years. When I look at her I can’t believe I have such a beautiful daughter.
17th May 2022 00:14am
26th Aug 2022 11:12am
This poem could have been written by either one of you.
She takes after you with her soft tone of her expression of feelings .
It seems like the two of you are more like sisters than mother and daughter.
She takes after you with her soft tone of her expression of feelings .
It seems like the two of you are more like sisters than mother and daughter.
