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Purely Thinking
Purely Thinking
It seems
Clear enough
To me
That what
Is on
Your mind
Is on
My mind
As well,
And all
We lack
Is simply
Leaning back
Into
The muffled
Notion
Of your legs
Just wrapped
Around
The center
Of
The core
Of your
Attention.
Believe me,
I've been
Thinking
The very
Same
Thing.
It's still
A sapiosexual
Thought.
You've been on
My mind
For hours.
It seems
Clear enough
To me
That what
Is on
Your mind
Is on
My mind
As well,
And all
We lack
Is simply
Leaning back
Into
The muffled
Notion
Of your legs
Just wrapped
Around
The center
Of
The core
Of your
Attention.
Believe me,
I've been
Thinking
The very
Same
Thing.
It's still
A sapiosexual
Thought.
You've been on
My mind
For hours.
Published 15th May 2022
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15th May 2022 4:21pm
15th May 2022 10:32pm
15th May 2022 11:02pm
What utterly breathtaking lines...
"The muffled
Notion
Of your legs
Just wrapped
Around
The center
Of
The core
Of your
Attention."
I'm still letting that soak in.... l'll clearly have to read it several, several more times.... ha! 😏
You're a master poet.
Hands down.
The ability to convey all that you do, with such minimal wording, astounds and totally enthralls.
This piece left me feeling like I've had this similar experience, so beyond a relatability, I felt more of a welcomed 'intrusion' to my own personal thoughts... because it hit actually that close.
Crisp, and ultimately —napalm.
🌹 - 💙
B
"The muffled
Notion
Of your legs
Just wrapped
Around
The center
Of
The core
Of your
Attention."
I'm still letting that soak in.... l'll clearly have to read it several, several more times.... ha! 😏
You're a master poet.
Hands down.
The ability to convey all that you do, with such minimal wording, astounds and totally enthralls.
This piece left me feeling like I've had this similar experience, so beyond a relatability, I felt more of a welcomed 'intrusion' to my own personal thoughts... because it hit actually that close.
Crisp, and ultimately —napalm.
🌹 - 💙
B
16th May 2022 6:51am
Well, napalm love, then.
Hitting close to your personal thoughts begs knowing the difference spread between close and right on. Perhaps an edit or an addition would produce an edition that would be spot on.
Intrusion or infusion....in the neighborhood. I'll go for tantalizingly close and asmptotically tongue twisted.
Hitting close to your personal thoughts begs knowing the difference spread between close and right on. Perhaps an edit or an addition would produce an edition that would be spot on.
Intrusion or infusion....in the neighborhood. I'll go for tantalizingly close and asmptotically tongue twisted.
