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By the Window
By the Window
Country songs
Have a way
Of recreating
What the ironies
Of life
Can offer
Every day.
And here
I have
The waitress of
My dreams
In every way.
"Can I
Help you,"
She first says,
And I want
To say,
"I know
Just what
I want,
But I'll just
Order
Off the menu
Anyway."
"I'll be
Your server,
And my name
Is Tiffany,
So if
You need
Anything
At all
Just let me
Know."
("I'll take
The collar
For one
With the leather
Leash."
"A side order
Of milk
In a bowl."
"The uniform
You're wearing
Is fine,
And
Some kitten ears.")
"Sir,
Did you want
To order,
Or do you
Need a moment?"
("The All-American Slam
And you
On this table top.")
"Sir?
I'll come
Back
When you're
Ready."
Country songs
Have a way
Of recreating
What the ironies
Of life
Can offer
Every day.
And here
I have
The waitress of
My dreams
In every way.
"Can I
Help you,"
She first says,
And I want
To say,
"I know
Just what
I want,
But I'll just
Order
Off the menu
Anyway."
"I'll be
Your server,
And my name
Is Tiffany,
So if
You need
Anything
At all
Just let me
Know."
("I'll take
The collar
For one
With the leather
Leash."
"A side order
Of milk
In a bowl."
"The uniform
You're wearing
Is fine,
And
Some kitten ears.")
"Sir,
Did you want
To order,
Or do you
Need a moment?"
("The All-American Slam
And you
On this table top.")
"Sir?
I'll come
Back
When you're
Ready."
Published 16th May 2022
Author's Note
Breakfast at _______ can be a very fulfilling experience.....
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16th May 2022 4:07pm
hello dearest RT so sexy are you fantasies
giving me a peak into the mind of a man...
by the way I was a waitress there when
I was eighteen ❤️
giving me a peak into the mind of a man...
by the way I was a waitress there when
I was eighteen ❤️
16th May 2022 4:51pm
Who knows what you might have served up in the minds of your customers?
I do have an active imagination.
Trolls have really ruined our species. It would be nice to convey to someone the absolute pleasure we have just basking in the radiance of their cosmic significance.
I often pass by someone and think to myself, "Damn, she would look good in rope!"
Or I'll think, "I can smell her perfume way over here. I wonder what a kiss would taste like on her collar bone."
Or ....
See...you just can't say stuff like that in public without people taking it the wrong way.
Intimate conversation seems to have gone the way of the dodo bird.
You can say all manner of cruel and hateful things, and it's called "free speech."
But, try to compliment someone on the unutterable tenderness of their attenuation to the human aesthetics of interpersonal and interdependent semantics, and everyone goes institutionalized.
I do have an active imagination.
Trolls have really ruined our species. It would be nice to convey to someone the absolute pleasure we have just basking in the radiance of their cosmic significance.
I often pass by someone and think to myself, "Damn, she would look good in rope!"
Or I'll think, "I can smell her perfume way over here. I wonder what a kiss would taste like on her collar bone."
Or ....
See...you just can't say stuff like that in public without people taking it the wrong way.
Intimate conversation seems to have gone the way of the dodo bird.
You can say all manner of cruel and hateful things, and it's called "free speech."
But, try to compliment someone on the unutterable tenderness of their attenuation to the human aesthetics of interpersonal and interdependent semantics, and everyone goes institutionalized.
Anonymous
16th May 2022 5:55pm
I giggled and squirmed slyly in my chair at this juicy inner monologue.... We are human beings without filters in our own heads and I am nothing if not the most nosy of peeping Tom's.... so this absolutely swept me away...
Mmmm.. those were thoughts that definitely deserved to be shared... I'm entirely glad you did.
It's interesting to wonder what a snapshot into her mind might have been, had she felt similarly, yet was politely disguising...Ohh my fired up imagination sparks!!
Yes, I concur... being overly "PC" usually means sanitizing conversations to the point where they're completely 'beige'... Ugggh...
It's finding those like minds that is sometimes difficult, yet exponentially rewarding when you do!!
What a tremendously pleasurable read, RT
I think it's my favorite one today!
🌹-💙
B
Mmmm.. those were thoughts that definitely deserved to be shared... I'm entirely glad you did.
It's interesting to wonder what a snapshot into her mind might have been, had she felt similarly, yet was politely disguising...Ohh my fired up imagination sparks!!
Yes, I concur... being overly "PC" usually means sanitizing conversations to the point where they're completely 'beige'... Ugggh...
It's finding those like minds that is sometimes difficult, yet exponentially rewarding when you do!!
What a tremendously pleasurable read, RT
I think it's my favorite one today!
🌹-💙
B
16th May 2022 5:59pm
16th May 2022 6:10pm
Hilarious. Is that Tiffany's in NYC you cryptically refer to in your footnote?
16th May 2022 6:52pm
The subtext is that we settle for Cracker Jack's (plastic delusion) but we want Tiffany's (Tiffany...a real person.)
So, yes.
It's the secret sexlife of Walter Mitty....Smutty.
But. There is a real connection here I'm alluding to. All of my work has an analogue in the real world.
Cats on a leash...wildness tamed... slightly.
My poems all have an element allusion to cunnilingus....the subtext of giving pleasure as a dominant feature since compersion enjoys the joys of others. Getting off to someone's getting off is a sensually sadistic way of a politely forced orgasm, but it's also good manners not to take a bite until the cook tastes her food .
I enjoy juxtaposition and integrated reciprocities. I can watch for hours. A woman's voice, summarizing her day....
My imagination works overtime.
So, yes.
It's the secret sexlife of Walter Mitty....Smutty.
But. There is a real connection here I'm alluding to. All of my work has an analogue in the real world.
Cats on a leash...wildness tamed... slightly.
My poems all have an element allusion to cunnilingus....the subtext of giving pleasure as a dominant feature since compersion enjoys the joys of others. Getting off to someone's getting off is a sensually sadistic way of a politely forced orgasm, but it's also good manners not to take a bite until the cook tastes her food .
I enjoy juxtaposition and integrated reciprocities. I can watch for hours. A woman's voice, summarizing her day....
My imagination works overtime.
18th May 2022 3:39pm
I have learned to appreciate and even enjoy country songs. :) I love taking this stroll through the mind with you turtle. I am so often told I don't have a filter, but why does it always have to be inappropriate to say what is on your mind. :p There can be no doubt she would find it exciting and flattering to be found so attractive. The mind can take us to such wonderful places but living something is so much better, isn't it? ;)
18th May 2022 5:43pm
