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Mmm... At Last...
When naked perceptions come out to seductively play
Soft caresses my beating heart continues to pray
Cupid’s bow please steadily guide me
Your embedded arrow continues to open my emotions to flee
Allow rapture of my words to continue to flow free
Whisper in my ear your beautiful lines
May they intoxicate my mind with inspiration as if sipping on your vibe like fine wine
My love, I need you to mentally abuse
Shower me with perceptions for me to vividly use
Don’t allow my thoughts to get shifted where both of us lose
Covet my inquisitive mind with alluring ideas
Tenderly kiss my brain, our lips we shall seal
Relishing in such a sweet captivating hangover, my handsome lover
Sweep me up in your arms, lay me on a bed of silken covers
Your arrow in me is getting so weak
Yet, my handsome muse knows the vows I have taken to love as my lips softly speaks
Passion, desires, lust, emotions, as I write to seek
Emotions gladly spilling forth my heart in glee
Giving, receiving, love in heightened euphoric peaks
Bodies fused as passion leaks
Cerebral cortex still holding on
Shh, don’t go, the melody embracing us like an unified mental song
Relax, don't move away too quick
Mmm, I feel your girth pulsating with each upward lick
As I enjoy mouthing your width
Over the fatten helmet, such weakening flicks to the tip
My lips giving you heated passion, by my sultry rules
Makes my excited juices pool
Pearly flow down my throat, streams escaping down my chin of its drool
Soft caresses my beating heart continues to pray
Cupid’s bow please steadily guide me
Your embedded arrow continues to open my emotions to flee
Allow rapture of my words to continue to flow free
Whisper in my ear your beautiful lines
May they intoxicate my mind with inspiration as if sipping on your vibe like fine wine
My love, I need you to mentally abuse
Shower me with perceptions for me to vividly use
Don’t allow my thoughts to get shifted where both of us lose
Covet my inquisitive mind with alluring ideas
Tenderly kiss my brain, our lips we shall seal
Relishing in such a sweet captivating hangover, my handsome lover
Sweep me up in your arms, lay me on a bed of silken covers
Your arrow in me is getting so weak
Yet, my handsome muse knows the vows I have taken to love as my lips softly speaks
Passion, desires, lust, emotions, as I write to seek
Emotions gladly spilling forth my heart in glee
Giving, receiving, love in heightened euphoric peaks
Bodies fused as passion leaks
Cerebral cortex still holding on
Shh, don’t go, the melody embracing us like an unified mental song
Relax, don't move away too quick
Mmm, I feel your girth pulsating with each upward lick
As I enjoy mouthing your width
Over the fatten helmet, such weakening flicks to the tip
My lips giving you heated passion, by my sultry rules
Makes my excited juices pool
Pearly flow down my throat, streams escaping down my chin of its drool
Published 14th May 2022
| Edited 25th Dec 2023
Author's Note
Poem inspired by Etta James' ballad, At Last
SKC
SKC
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14th May 2022 7:54am
A romantic, sexy, savourable read.
Like the double-meaning (intended or not) use of 'arrow' which could refer to Cupid or to the lover's masculine part, as in these lines:
Relishing in such a sweet captivating hangover, my handsome lover
Sweep me up in your arms, lay me on a bed of silken covers
Your arrow in me is getting so weak
Yet, my handsome muse knows the vows I have taken to love as my lips softly speaks [she professes her loyalty, she ain't going to run away to someone else]
Like the double-meaning (intended or not) use of 'arrow' which could refer to Cupid or to the lover's masculine part, as in these lines:
Relishing in such a sweet captivating hangover, my handsome lover
Sweep me up in your arms, lay me on a bed of silken covers
Your arrow in me is getting so weak
Yet, my handsome muse knows the vows I have taken to love as my lips softly speaks [she professes her loyalty, she ain't going to run away to someone else]
14th May 2022 9:13am
Terrific song to draw inspiration from. What is constantly a joy is where I strain to keep within a consistent pattern in terms of rhyme scheme, you use unpredictably to engage the reader and make her/ him curious as to what comes next. Pieces of the poem especially as you finish up hit me like a joyous earthquake.
14th May 2022 11:27am
this my friend was a sweet sensual read could write all day on how it moved me as there are not a enough words to say this one will say it all WOW
14th May 2022 11:10pm
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