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I Actually Saw Her
Walking through a crowd of people
I actually saw her
It was weird at first
As she was looking at me
As we walked closer to each other
I found myself looking
straight into her eyes
She didn't flinch as if she knew why
I couldn't take my eyes off her
We walked by
no hi nor goodbye
There she was in front of me
The random girl from the internet
Which I had jerked off to
I actually saw her
It was weird at first
As she was looking at me
As we walked closer to each other
I found myself looking
straight into her eyes
She didn't flinch as if she knew why
I couldn't take my eyes off her
We walked by
no hi nor goodbye
There she was in front of me
The random girl from the internet
Which I had jerked off to
Published 13th May 2022
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Anonymous
13th May 2022 12:55pm
That's pretty sweet
13th May 2022 4:34pm
13th May 2022 1:02pm
that was hilarious...
in your build up, I was going through famous, current people in my mind. I even thought the webmiss. then you pitch up with the word "random" and I started giggling by the end of the last line I was on the floor in fits of it.
stellar stuff! brilliant!
Al
in your build up, I was going through famous, current people in my mind. I even thought the webmiss. then you pitch up with the word "random" and I started giggling by the end of the last line I was on the floor in fits of it.
stellar stuff! brilliant!
Al
13th May 2022 4:36pm
Hi Al
Oh man I'm glad it landed. Especially with it possibly being anyone. Your mind fills in the blanks.
Thank you so much for this comment
Oh man I'm glad it landed. Especially with it possibly being anyone. Your mind fills in the blanks.
Thank you so much for this comment
13th May 2022 1:04pm
13th May 2022 4:39pm
Thank you so much. Funny story I just realized that there's a bit of a rhyming scheme in this poem. Happened unintentionally but I'm glad it's there.
