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Pure Evil
evil cannot be pure
because the very self of it
- its raison d'ętre, reason for
being - reposes in impurity.
the maniac or beast is never just,
a monster always comes from a closet.
because the very self of it
- its raison d'ętre, reason for
being - reposes in impurity.
the maniac or beast is never just,
a monster always comes from a closet.
Published 5th May 2022
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like the debunking of a cliche. I think you didn’t need to put in “reason for being”; think raison d’etre was simply enough.
6th May 2022 00:28am
Yeah, you may have a point there. For me “reason for being” felt slightly different from “the most important thing about something”, which is the definition of the French phrase. Plus I did it for scansion. But my scansion is personal rather than objective anyway.
So yeah... I can see how the French phrase on its own would be more impactful. Thank you for your kind and helpful comment, my friend!
So yeah... I can see how the French phrase on its own would be more impactful. Thank you for your kind and helpful comment, my friend!
