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Thunderstorm - Daughter's poem
As thunder follows lightning
And flowers follow rain
Our bodies are joined in innocence
We can never be the same
Our love is like the thunderstorm
That can’t be held or tamed
As we lie naked beneath the clouds
We feel no fear or shame
And flowers follow rain
Our bodies are joined in innocence
We can never be the same
Our love is like the thunderstorm
That can’t be held or tamed
As we lie naked beneath the clouds
We feel no fear or shame
Published 5th May 2022
Author's Note
My daughter wrote this for her lover. I thought it was sweet and asked to share.
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5th May 2022 6:04pm
Like the almost perfect rhyming of words at the end of every second line.
A proclamation of love and passion. Bless them both.
I can relate to the bit about thunderstorms in that I have (when 60) showered in a rainstorm al fresco in my backyard.
A proclamation of love and passion. Bless them both.
I can relate to the bit about thunderstorms in that I have (when 60) showered in a rainstorm al fresco in my backyard.
26th Aug 2022 3:14pm
9th Sep 2022 4:25am
