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Lost
Forgoten mistaken, this heart won't stop aching
I try and I die
Please forgive me my love
My only hope
Is that you nevr leave my side
I try and I die
Please forgive me my love
My only hope
Is that you nevr leave my side
Published 15th Mar 2012
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22nd Mar 2012 1:23am
This is very nice. Rather short, but still good. Hope you add some more poems soon.
22nd Mar 2012 4:43pm
22nd Mar 2012 9:24pm
22nd Mar 2012 9:29pm
I really think you should add more poems... I know you love writing... why not share??? xD
23rd Mar 2012 4:24pm
27th Apr 2012 5:35pm
I like short ones that are full of impact. Sometimes love doesn't take alot of words. Like it!! :)
27th Apr 2012 5:53pm
