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watering the flowers
when I saw her watering the flowers
I knew she was the one
to revive the dying
growing inside the cracks
in the sidewalk
the jagged edges
on a pain felt path
to nowhere
to not be found
but
it was found
in the nourishment
pouring out
ever slowly
upon the dried up,
wilting rose
where one would surely pose
life and love
and what she chose
I knew she was the one
to revive the dying
growing inside the cracks
in the sidewalk
the jagged edges
on a pain felt path
to nowhere
to not be found
but
it was found
in the nourishment
pouring out
ever slowly
upon the dried up,
wilting rose
where one would surely pose
life and love
and what she chose
Published 1st May 2022
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1st May 2022 1:31am
i guess i should be looking for " the one " watering the cacti?
wonderful wishful, wistful feel to this spill
wonderful wishful, wistful feel to this spill
1st May 2022 1:32am
1st May 2022 3:18am
Thank you for sharing, this is beautifully written. I can feel the flutter in my heart from that feeling of excitement you get being starstruck from desire for the first time.
1st May 2022 2:29pm
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24th May 2022 1:43am
Sometimes you just know and when she is watering your flowers your love will always grow and she will never dry up and wilt as you water her flower with your essence.
24th May 2022 3:29am
Quite a mouthful... We water one another as the love grows, nice analogy... Thanks k xx
