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Wild at heart friday
the bar is packed and Lene Lovich is on stage
I look up at him
he looks like something inbetween Jason Isaacs
and Vincent Cassel
I'm going to go home with him tonight
and sit on his face
I look up at him
he looks like something inbetween Jason Isaacs
and Vincent Cassel
I'm going to go home with him tonight
and sit on his face
Published 27th Apr 2022
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1st of April 2022 @ wild at heart
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27th Apr 2022 1:00am
27th Apr 2022 6:05am
A smile raising read, makes a change from 'I am going to go home with him tonight and XXXX [insert favoured four letter word] him.'
27th Apr 2022 6:29am
🎶"My lucky numbers, one!"🎶 My fave song ever!
Lovely poetry here. While bringing a smile with the quick sharp quirks it still seeps lust on the page. It's very clever. I enjoyed that you left it completely ambiguous as to who was the lucky recipient of the honor. Leaves space for thinking.
Well done
Thanks for sharing
Al
Lovely poetry here. While bringing a smile with the quick sharp quirks it still seeps lust on the page. It's very clever. I enjoyed that you left it completely ambiguous as to who was the lucky recipient of the honor. Leaves space for thinking.
Well done
Thanks for sharing
Al
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15th Oct 2022 2:47pm
This conjured up two different songs. Congratulations on saying so much with supreme brevity.
23rd Jan 2023 10:03am
