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A Doll's Dream
The empty of my life finds
fullness in the mystery of his touch
I slept here with Julie as a child and
my favorite doll still acts as
the sentinel of my bedroom.
The same lips that kissed Julie goodnight
now purse against my lover’s erection.
My lips feel warm and I smile,
thinking dolls must have dreams
for those who love them.
I glanced at Julie’s longing eyes and then
covered him with my mouth.
fullness in the mystery of his touch
I slept here with Julie as a child and
my favorite doll still acts as
the sentinel of my bedroom.
The same lips that kissed Julie goodnight
now purse against my lover’s erection.
My lips feel warm and I smile,
thinking dolls must have dreams
for those who love them.
I glanced at Julie’s longing eyes and then
covered him with my mouth.
Published 24th Apr 2022
| Edited 4th Sep 2022
Author's Note
My daughter shares more of her new love along with a bedroom selfie.
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If dolls could speak....favourite lines
I glanced at Julie’s longing eyes and then
covered him with my mouth.
Beautiful selfie. Her embrace of her own skin radiates.
I glanced at Julie’s longing eyes and then
covered him with my mouth.
Beautiful selfie. Her embrace of her own skin radiates.
28th Apr 2022 2:14pm
24th Apr 2022 10:32pm
25th Apr 2022 8:58pm
10th May 2022 2:31pm
How did I miss this! The image of her innocent lips kissing her doll with more mature lips is so beautiful. Well done young lady.
11th May 2022 12:20pm
Thank you for noticing that contrast in my daughter's poem. She'll like that you referred to her as "young lady."
27th Aug 2022 9:55pm
There's this affinity to nudity that your daughter seems to find appealing.
Somehow it would not be surprising if there was this comfort for bareness was one that was encouraged to be lived by mother and daughter.
Sometimes the absence of freedom in a person's youth restricts them in their adulthood.
Somehow it would not be surprising if there was this comfort for bareness was one that was encouraged to be lived by mother and daughter.
Sometimes the absence of freedom in a person's youth restricts them in their adulthood.
28th Aug 2022 2:05pm
Yes, she does like to go nude often and is very comfortable in her skin. I'm thankful for this.
28th Aug 2022 2:43pm
