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Pounding It!
He was hard!
his presentation,
almost arith-matic
almost beyond comprehension
his girth, just right,
priming his pump
feeling the compression building,
sealing her pleasure,
tight, his assault.....
…..unrelenting
with “thighs wide open”
and eyes “brilliantly bright”
...this is the "real thing". There's no pretending.
steady strokes, slow to start
longer and stronger
pulsing, pounding heart
(“the train roars toward it's destination on this warm, Savannah night.....”)
her mouth starts to water
as she “deeply opens her tent”
a brutal “Beast of Burden,”
his strong back so deeply bent
burrowed in the wetness
filled with orgasmic moans
the well is overflowing
trying to drive it home
Feel the eRUptioN....💦
one can never forget the sound
of their bodies throwing down
“to the rhythm.....”
his strong, tight haunches
desperately starting to
pound.....
Published 21st Apr 2022
| Edited 23rd Apr 2022
Author's Note
Mmmmmm......that time after the "first time". The one you can't forget......
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21st Apr 2022 6:51pm
21st Apr 2022 8:04pm
Her's bringing to attention of 'the introduction of the train' opens my eyes to the sex venue potential of railway sleeper cars.
Hi MusicallyMrM,how u doing?
This is a rapturous,wet is my lilly,erotic pleasure dome,for me.
U truly are an amazing Wordsmith.
I felt every word u spun!
Bellissimo!
X
This is a rapturous,wet is my lilly,erotic pleasure dome,for me.
U truly are an amazing Wordsmith.
I felt every word u spun!
Bellissimo!
X
22nd Apr 2022 3:15am
The music that runs through your life is so evident in this write. I do believe “with thighs wide open” you even played with a Creed song?
As always I enjoy your pen.
As always I enjoy your pen.
22nd Apr 2022 11:23pm
23rd Apr 2022 00:49am
