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The Perfect Love Poem
celebrating your
flowing hair
hazel eyes
and beautiful hands
I sat down to write
you
the flawless love poem
wording
your courageous heart
filled with
Mother Theresa in
living
sometimes allowing
a little
grim reaper
the ying in your
blood
the yang
in your
breath
tried a metaphor
-threw a few similes in
then pounded
the alliteration;
something about
soft
caring lips
-the sway in your hips
words fell to the page
perfectly aligned
wonderfully natural
like you
-cared for
as the
petals
of a black rose
weaved
in the thorns
of its stalk
the balladry
just couldn't match
I sat down to compose
an un-erring love poem
and realized
it's a process, see
you are,
you are the perfect
love poem
to me
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