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Time
I slowly freeze
the moments
of you and I
one by one
capturing the memories
inside my mind
before they rush by
we are only
but a fleeting
second in time
only a blink
of an eye
this is what
I will hold on to
before you and I
turn to dust
and vanish
into the universe
the moments
of you and I
one by one
capturing the memories
inside my mind
before they rush by
we are only
but a fleeting
second in time
only a blink
of an eye
this is what
I will hold on to
before you and I
turn to dust
and vanish
into the universe
Published 10th Apr 2022
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10th Apr 2022 10:07pm
You beautifully captured the transitory nature of life and it seems, love as well.
10th Apr 2022 10:11pm
11th Apr 2022 1:32am
time, the universe, and you....
add up to a sum...and you have a poem.
wonderful grouping of words.
add up to a sum...and you have a poem.
wonderful grouping of words.
11th Apr 2022 2:48am
11th Apr 2022 5:58am
Dear J,
I really enjoyed the importance placed on what’s real in a relationship and how quickly we have to acknowledge it because it’s all gone too fast. The tempo flows beautifully while reading. It’s a love story with a string message. Wonderful write. H🌷
I really enjoyed the importance placed on what’s real in a relationship and how quickly we have to acknowledge it because it’s all gone too fast. The tempo flows beautifully while reading. It’s a love story with a string message. Wonderful write. H🌷
