Velvet

Wowsy-Kapowsy! This was hot, raw, honest and exciting. I could just picture the sounds, sights, aromas, tastes and all else besides. It was a wonderfully lush and pleasing experience that left me totally drained and longing to read more.

Totally outstanding piece. I really loved it.

Thanks for sharing. It was a blast!

Wow! Thank you so much for the incredible comment! I'm pleased you loved it as much as I did letting it flow from my body onto the page.

You are very welcome. Take care.

Absolutely awesome erotica, great read, sexy write
Brilliant piece
Love and light
Ron xx

Hey you! Hope you're well! Thank you so much for your sweetness!

wonderful expression of the true raw...
exciting.
the essence....such a nice word

Thank you so much! You're so sweet!

To quote your comment to Dream Warrior, your feelings flow from your body onto the page.

this site needs more of this, in the erotica category
devilishly hot
and absolutely not crude at all!

enjoyed
thanks for sharing this!

Thank you so much for your incredible comment! Truly appreciated! 💜

your mind is in overdrive spilling upon thy canvas of sweet drops of passion

well done

Thank you so much!

Nice one, like the intensity of the poem

Thank you so very much!

So well done, got my mind to wander.

Not sure how I am just seeing your comment, but thank you!

I don't think anyone with blood in the veins isn't affected by this open write. Brought to mind two songs.

"sending a raging fire
through my veins
spread my legs
and open
my velvet flower "

like the word use here as fire and how one normally tends to a flower are very different

Thank you so much for your kind words!

mmm delicious indeed .... so delicious