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☽Seaweed☾
Loud,
It’s too loud
Plunging into darkness
I must meet her
This icy embrace
tangled in lust
I see her now
Or have I lost to the foam?
Green and Blue light
in form of a bubble
This seaweed
Feels like home
Published 10th Apr 2022
| Edited 26th Jan 2025
Author's Note
Do not fear the foam.♥
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
10th Apr 2022 4:51pm
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10th Apr 2022 6:58pm
i can tell You that the FEEL of drowning is NOT fun
that said,
our creative poet brings much to the metaphoric table
that said,
our creative poet brings much to the metaphoric table
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
10th Apr 2022 7:23pm
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23rd Apr 2022 12:40pm
Interesting perspective and eye opening. I hope this is just venting and you are not considering.
Drowning theme - drowning out the daily life struggle and your pain. We much prefer you on the shore. Your words show you have talent, and it is always a sad day to lose an artist.
Welcome to DUP and may the platform provide you "Medicinal" assistance.
Drowning theme - drowning out the daily life struggle and your pain. We much prefer you on the shore. Your words show you have talent, and it is always a sad day to lose an artist.
Welcome to DUP and may the platform provide you "Medicinal" assistance.
11th Apr 2023 2:59am
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Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
11th Apr 2023 3:01am
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