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SURRENDER TO WIN
It was a weird day
I did the work for her
Before finding out
I could not do the work
Do I have to
Let myself go now
No just
Re-integrate
You lost time again
Or maybe that was
Another day
This unbearable lightness
So many times
The wisdom
Of experience
Leads to the same place
Fighting invisible foes
To a draw
The only way out
Surrender to win
I did the work for her
Before finding out
I could not do the work
Do I have to
Let myself go now
No just
Re-integrate
You lost time again
Or maybe that was
Another day
This unbearable lightness
So many times
The wisdom
Of experience
Leads to the same place
Fighting invisible foes
To a draw
The only way out
Surrender to win
Published 8th Apr 2022
| Edited 14th Apr 2022
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9th Apr 2022 5:03am
Dear K,
Surrender to win. I like that. I must remember that the next time I’m in a lose-lose situation. I enjoyed the very thoughtful piece. H🌷
Surrender to win. I like that. I must remember that the next time I’m in a lose-lose situation. I enjoyed the very thoughtful piece. H🌷
9th Apr 2022 7:16am
