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Never to trust.
I cant say I understand
I cant say I want to
But understand this
Love will always take two
So the fact that you lie
Promised me over and over
Then go and disappear
I thought I found a clover
But it was fake
Not long did it take
To be hurt
And again for my sake
I shut it off
My emotions
And devotions
To you
I cant say I want to
But understand this
Love will always take two
So the fact that you lie
Promised me over and over
Then go and disappear
I thought I found a clover
But it was fake
Not long did it take
To be hurt
And again for my sake
I shut it off
My emotions
And devotions
To you
Published 2nd Apr 2022
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2nd Apr 2022 7:33pm
An honest piece of writing, that is true of so many relationships across the board. Tight work on this version of the relationship drama
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2022 7:35pm
Those opening four lines are so strong, and show a level of vulnerability to the write that I can really get behind. I found this to be a very honest piece of writing that says much about the writer and the emotions at the time.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Thank you for sharing.
-M
2nd Apr 2022 11:58pm
Profound depth of emotion, filtered into
awareness and clarified... Enabling even more profound insights to be had.
Nicely done.
awareness and clarified... Enabling even more profound insights to be had.
Nicely done.
