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If They See
In the depths of you
and the morning
sun-kissed through a window
it would be a voyeur's delight
seeing us entangled like that
the sheets on the floor
our naked admiration on display
my hand at your forehead
your bottom
against me
everything
in its proper place
and the morning
sun-kissed through a window
it would be a voyeur's delight
seeing us entangled like that
the sheets on the floor
our naked admiration on display
my hand at your forehead
your bottom
against me
everything
in its proper place
Published 2nd Apr 2022
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2nd Apr 2022 4:58pm
The lines could well caption your profile pic:
sun kissed through a window....
our naked admiration on display
my hand at your forehead
sun kissed through a window....
our naked admiration on display
my hand at your forehead
2nd Apr 2022 6:57pm
2nd Apr 2022 11:49pm
3rd Apr 2022 3:06pm
3rd Apr 2022 2:51am
What a reminiscing musing, my tender poet, I could only assume, from enjoying the wonderous of a very enticing night. I do like the vibe in the brevity, the simplicity of those touching and engaging emotions you have poetically displayed
Enjoy the remainder of your weekend...🐾🐾
Enjoy the remainder of your weekend...🐾🐾
3rd Apr 2022 3:08pm
Sometimes the brevity fuels the imagination to fill in those gaps. ;) Appreciated your enthusiasm for the noted musing. Enjoy your Sunday!
3rd Apr 2022 10:18pm
You are humbly welcome, my tender poet... and please enjoy your Sunday as well...
11th Apr 2022 11:29am
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