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Endlessness
…
Waves of silence
Shattering time
This desire is forgiving
Must I do it?
Stop
Not again.
Breathe deeply
Waves of silence…
Take me
Waves of silence
Shattering time
This desire is forgiving
Must I do it?
Stop
Not again.
Breathe deeply
Waves of silence…
Take me
Published 2nd Apr 2022
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2nd Apr 2022 7:49pm
Hello there
Welcome to DU. I really liked the formatting of this poem. The spaces add so much movement to the words.
Thank you for sharing, I hope you find all that you need here.
-M
Welcome to DU. I really liked the formatting of this poem. The spaces add so much movement to the words.
Thank you for sharing, I hope you find all that you need here.
-M
4th Apr 2022 2:34am
Thanks, for sharing. Look forward to more of your poems. Hugs and peace, Oral
7th Apr 2022 5:47am
There's some deep buoyancy.. Meaning it feels terrifically poignant.
I appreciate you taking the time to share with us.
Welcome and I hope you enjoy your time here.
🌹 B
I appreciate you taking the time to share with us.
Welcome and I hope you enjoy your time here.
🌹 B
9th Apr 2022 8:12am
Sharing a moment with me is more than enough. I am grateful for your feedback.
10th Apr 2022 11:44am
10th Apr 2022 7:00pm
no idea of the theme spilled here
but still gave me shivers while perusing
welcome to the Deep
but still gave me shivers while perusing
welcome to the Deep
28th Feb 2024 11:02pm
