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Relief Carved into Moment
Droplets on the shingles
In Tin-tin tingles…
Pieces
Of
Proclivities
For
Experience
Are rotated by neutrinos
Of heart
Oriented
Art
Behind the skies
Of
Lidded
Eyes
As bubbled fragrance
Finds
An
Audience:
Breath
Of
Belief
As backdrop to a relief
Of a divinity that
Purifies.
Published 30th Mar 2022
Author's Note
Long ago when I read about this individual from
ancient times, who had a system to bring water up a mountain...
And took like 3 baths a day.
That made me start taking baths, rather than shower.
I haven't taken a bath in quite a while.
Was looking at the bathtub
and sort of had a vision of someone...
Taking a bath as a therapeutic things,
listening to the rain...
ancient times, who had a system to bring water up a mountain...
And took like 3 baths a day.
That made me start taking baths, rather than shower.
I haven't taken a bath in quite a while.
Was looking at the bathtub
and sort of had a vision of someone...
Taking a bath as a therapeutic things,
listening to the rain...
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30th Mar 2022 8:25pm
31st Mar 2022 6:00am
30th Mar 2022 8:25pm
31st Mar 2022 6:01am
30th Mar 2022 10:33pm
I felt this...
Sometimes I can really relate to myself, being behind the skies of lidded eyes.... That
line echoes within me for some reason...
Thank you for sharing... whimsically moving.
🌹 - 💙
B
x
Sometimes I can really relate to myself, being behind the skies of lidded eyes.... That
line echoes within me for some reason...
Thank you for sharing... whimsically moving.
🌹 - 💙
B
x
31st Mar 2022 6:02am
31st Mar 2022 1:59am
I love the reference to oriented art. The direction it gave
in this piece. The heart - eyes - and skies.
Just really cool amigo.
The pic is quite stunning as well. Has a Grecian feel to it.
Thinking of Medusa before she became the legend of Medusa.
Carved stone picture kinda triggered it for me.
Just where my mind went with this piece.
in this piece. The heart - eyes - and skies.
Just really cool amigo.
The pic is quite stunning as well. Has a Grecian feel to it.
Thinking of Medusa before she became the legend of Medusa.
Carved stone picture kinda triggered it for me.
Just where my mind went with this piece.
31st Mar 2022 6:02am
