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Instagram of Ghost
How the sun
Freezes
A moment
In
Digital pigment
&
Breezes -
Into the white flash,
Slow
Motion
Crash,
Met with movement
Of spiraled
Siren…
Where a signed
Sign
Hangs at high noon
At half mast:
Taken too soon,
Too fast.
Published 30th Mar 2022
Author's Note
Thinking of car crash that occurred in Tishomingo Oklahoma,
which took the lives of 6 teenage girls...
I just think that the type & concentration of existential energy,
comprising the youth is so special and powerful...
Like a star machine... Which can become a dark supernova.
(I can really relate to the speed of tragedy.)
I find it haunting when something of this nature occurs,
[the dark supernova element], and one can still visit the IG etc.
Like a person's last words,
in the form of an image.
A lot of times I can hear the universe speaking...
In such things.
which took the lives of 6 teenage girls...
I just think that the type & concentration of existential energy,
comprising the youth is so special and powerful...
Like a star machine... Which can become a dark supernova.
(I can really relate to the speed of tragedy.)
I find it haunting when something of this nature occurs,
[the dark supernova element], and one can still visit the IG etc.
Like a person's last words,
in the form of an image.
A lot of times I can hear the universe speaking...
In such things.
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30th Mar 2022 10:01am
I have no relevant comment. Good subject matter, worked on appropriately by a skilled poet, is really all I can say about this.
30th Mar 2022 7:41pm
30th Mar 2022 11:15am
Wow... this is so poignant... love the sunlight freezing... great poetic paradox...
30th Mar 2022 7:42pm
31st Mar 2022 1:45am
Gripping read Cipher.
Sad even. Things do spin out of
control quickly - and completely alter
everything around you.
Never quite the same afterwards.
Except for the social media posts.
But even then - to me - looking at after the fact -
just feels off. Like a intrusion of a sacred place.
Sad even. Things do spin out of
control quickly - and completely alter
everything around you.
Never quite the same afterwards.
Except for the social media posts.
But even then - to me - looking at after the fact -
just feels off. Like a intrusion of a sacred place.
31st Mar 2022 2:12am
Such excellent perspectives, A.
You raise an excellent point about
[an intrusion of a sacred place.]
If you can believe this:
the young ladies were being made fun of on SM...
For not wearing seat belts
and other things.
One wonders if somehow the
spirits of the dead can see this...
I think that was part of the reason
I wanted to turn it into art...
You raise an excellent point about
[an intrusion of a sacred place.]
If you can believe this:
the young ladies were being made fun of on SM...
For not wearing seat belts
and other things.
One wonders if somehow the
spirits of the dead can see this...
I think that was part of the reason
I wanted to turn it into art...
31st Mar 2022 2:27am
That is just fuuucked up!!!!
God bless them. They had a tragic ending. No need to
pass judgment with petty moral high ground.
Jeeze - sometimes I wonder if common decency is the
thing of the past.
So glad you took an interest and put this into
a memorial of art amigo:)
God bless them. They had a tragic ending. No need to
pass judgment with petty moral high ground.
Jeeze - sometimes I wonder if common decency is the
thing of the past.
So glad you took an interest and put this into
a memorial of art amigo:)
31st Mar 2022 4:43am
