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DYING INSIDE
Upon me he does ride
as he's dying inside
crux of my legs forking,
while in wind down talking.
After our lusts have urged,
our bodies now lie merged
at point of connection,
arms cradle each other,
his on mine makes cover.
Erection subsiding,
orgasm-providing
duty is fully done,
in my wide opened cun,
In union remained
when testicles have drained
themselves of his pearl seed
at climax of the deed,
.
as he's dying inside
crux of my legs forking,
while in wind down talking.
After our lusts have urged,
our bodies now lie merged
at point of connection,
arms cradle each other,
his on mine makes cover.
Erection subsiding,
orgasm-providing
duty is fully done,
in my wide opened cun,
In union remained
when testicles have drained
themselves of his pearl seed
at climax of the deed,
.
Published 21st Mar 2022
Author's Note
Inspired by Nizana's poem 'Dying into me' .
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21st Mar 2022 8:19am
21st Mar 2022 10:06am
I enjoyed reading your poem and am flattered that mine prompted you to write it. Loved the image you painted here.
our bodies now lie merged
at point of connection,
arms cradle each other,
his on mine makes cover.
our bodies now lie merged
at point of connection,
arms cradle each other,
his on mine makes cover.
21st Mar 2022 12:54pm
