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HOLLOWNESS----PAIN---SADNESS

Show me just man or woman
who has no hollowness emptiness butterfly feelings in tummy
then accompanied by
pain
no disdain
heavy breathing in heart
does remains
till one is pushed though doldrums drains
at last nothing
only sadness remains
no ashes even
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true feelings in life
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