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Ache
And perhaps
You were meant to be
My one
And only;
And the loss
Of my greatest love
Has left me
Here, and lonely.
You were meant to be
My one
And only;
And the loss
Of my greatest love
Has left me
Here, and lonely.
Published 13th Mar 2022
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A feeble write for Larissa, though she’ll never know it
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14th Mar 2022 2:56am
Dear tmw,
This is far from feeble. It’s courageous to be honest. Whether she’ll ever know it or not you do and you’ve acknowledged it in such a lovely way that the universe will receive it and offer something in return far greater.
I think this is a beautiful poem.
H🌷
This is far from feeble. It’s courageous to be honest. Whether she’ll ever know it or not you do and you’ve acknowledged it in such a lovely way that the universe will receive it and offer something in return far greater.
I think this is a beautiful poem.
H🌷
14th Mar 2022 3:00am
