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a hope for tomorrow.



In the tired morning
dark slowly beckons bluish

The promise'd day
looms
Just out of reach

Quiet mingles
amidst low ambient breaths
singing a background song

Forcing thoughts
like waves,
they pitch and roll—
battering such hidden places

Until you're there.

Washed up upon a rocky shore
of my precarious jagged ore
I am comforted
like I knew I would be

Allowing the shroud
of your memory
to bathe and rescue me

Today I willingly stay lost in you...




...there's always hope
for tomorrow.







Written by Bluevelvete
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Author's Note
A revision of an old poem that I attempted my first few months on DUP
© Blu2022
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