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She Rises
I am viscera slipping through
her moon of half-crested belly.
Limbs bend in archaic archetypes:
her skin slack in gray folds.
White hair spread across remnants
of golden crop, weathered by frosted kiss.
Quiet hush settles across her every
fret and fear of tomorrow.
Mind and body become ash—
Spirit released into new flames.
her moon of half-crested belly.
Limbs bend in archaic archetypes:
her skin slack in gray folds.
White hair spread across remnants
of golden crop, weathered by frosted kiss.
Quiet hush settles across her every
fret and fear of tomorrow.
Mind and body become ash—
Spirit released into new flames.
Published 10th Mar 2022
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11th Mar 2022 00:23am
What is this image that we're getting from this was this a movie. Dang we keep think of two different scenes with this piece. Tight you made us think Lady
11th Mar 2022 1:26am
Nope, not from a movie. Just words I’ve been throwing at a page for a month. Thanks, Me. I’m glad it turned out to be a thinker.
11th Mar 2022 1:34am
At first we kept seeing a female phoenix but then we saw some movie we saw of a lady caught in a nuclear war and getting burnt to ash and blowing away
11th Mar 2022 2:01am
11th Mar 2022 2:46am
It brings to mind a well-aged woman who has found peace wisdom beauty and acceptance blossom through her ages of life experience. Very beautiful—like fine art which speaks to each observer differently.
11th Mar 2022 6:35am
I got impressions of the divine feminine,
which could be manifested through the individual...
I very my like the symbol of the Phoenix.
A most refined piece, Eerie...
Really captivated my imagination.
which could be manifested through the individual...
I very my like the symbol of the Phoenix.
A most refined piece, Eerie...
Really captivated my imagination.
12th Mar 2022 00:41am
I love the buildup in this.
Great visuals and contrast with the frost kisses and
new flames.
Stunning amiga:)
Great visuals and contrast with the frost kisses and
new flames.
Stunning amiga:)
17th Mar 2022 3:35pm
The phoenix, the firebird, whatever the name, it's an uplifting feeling.
Great spill.
Great spill.
18th Mar 2022 1:17am
Good to see you posting new material. Is was worth my wait.
This is a very strong , well worded offering you gave us. Thank you.
This is a very strong , well worded offering you gave us. Thank you.
20th Nov 2024 2:08am
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