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Rapmonize
Spinning in your voice
Rapmonized words of your choice
Fused like harmonica fluid
Blending and merging with my air
Flying just for me
Voice sending ripples
Like vitamins of the sun
Breathing in your tones
Against my gums
My heart is beating
and tasting humm humm humm
My pulse is fire
Desire in a lighter
Melting all my cells
Heaven's smoking
all of my shells
You’re synthesized around my sky
I’m feeling hella alive
As you Rapmonize my body
Rocking like a hammock
Baby I’m your Hawaii
Your heart is beating
And tasting humm humm humm
Rapmonized words of your choice
Fused like harmonica fluid
Blending and merging with my air
Flying just for me
Voice sending ripples
Like vitamins of the sun
Breathing in your tones
Against my gums
My heart is beating
and tasting humm humm humm
My pulse is fire
Desire in a lighter
Melting all my cells
Heaven's smoking
all of my shells
You’re synthesized around my sky
I’m feeling hella alive
As you Rapmonize my body
Rocking like a hammock
Baby I’m your Hawaii
Your heart is beating
And tasting humm humm humm
Author's Note
Rapmonize (rap & harmonize) I merged them together to make a word.
Okay - so I have been listening to
Hippie Sabotage's album Red Moon Rising.
Their voice is soooo seductive. I love how they sound like rap
but it's also got harmony.
So yeah - I want to have sex to this whole album!!!!!
Yes- I went there. hehehehe
Okay - so I have been listening to
Hippie Sabotage's album Red Moon Rising.
Their voice is soooo seductive. I love how they sound like rap
but it's also got harmony.
So yeah - I want to have sex to this whole album!!!!!
Yes- I went there. hehehehe
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Re. Rapmonize
4th Mar 2022 4:56am
Re: Re. Rapmonize
4th Mar 2022 5:02am
Hey Mister,
Why thank you.!!!!
What does still cool mean?
Just up listening to to the album as I'm typing.
Song - 1000 blunts on right now. LOL
Not an avid pot smoker but it just gets me in a mood.
Goodnight mister:)
Why thank you.!!!!
What does still cool mean?
Just up listening to to the album as I'm typing.
Song - 1000 blunts on right now. LOL
Not an avid pot smoker but it just gets me in a mood.
Goodnight mister:)
Re: Re. Rapmonize
4th Mar 2022 5:05am
Re: Re. Rapmonize
5th Mar 2022 7:36pm
Oh, LOL
I thought it was some kind of new language lingo. hahah.
Now I feel kinda like a dork for asking.
Have a great weekend Mister:)
I thought it was some kind of new language lingo. hahah.
Now I feel kinda like a dork for asking.
Have a great weekend Mister:)
Re. Rapmonize
4th Mar 2022 8:23am
Listening right now...
... Immediately feel the cool vibe.
Cool name for a band.
(I have this shampoo I got called "hippie chic"...
It occurred to me... Just a moment ago, as I showered,
that hippie has become another word for yuppie, perhaps.
To a degree, of course... it was just commercialized...
There are still some real ones out there...
I am rather... Hippie like, in some ways...
But really unclassifiable.)
I totally dig bigly, your neologisms, A...
So so much. :)))
This piece is en fuego... With some killer, rapmonized lines.
Oh yeah...
I am digging this album, A.
(Yup... You went there. :)))
Too funny.
... Immediately feel the cool vibe.
Cool name for a band.
(I have this shampoo I got called "hippie chic"...
It occurred to me... Just a moment ago, as I showered,
that hippie has become another word for yuppie, perhaps.
To a degree, of course... it was just commercialized...
There are still some real ones out there...
I am rather... Hippie like, in some ways...
But really unclassifiable.)
I totally dig bigly, your neologisms, A...
So so much. :)))
This piece is en fuego... With some killer, rapmonized lines.
Oh yeah...
I am digging this album, A.
(Yup... You went there. :)))
Too funny.
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Re: Re. Rapmonize
5th Mar 2022 7:58pm
Hey Cipher,
Ha!! So happy you dug this.
Their voice just got me in a mood.
I think I got put under a spell when writing!!!
Hippie Chic - Ha!!
Hell - I might have to try that shampoo.
I am all kinds of things.
Depending on my mood.
My closet of costumes has so many people inside.
It helps me when I am writing characters.
To get the feel of them just for a moment.
Currently I am in a Native American state of mind.
I have 3 bone chokers I wear occasionally.
The meaning of them is so awesome:
The Native American bone choker served not only to protect a warrior physically but spiritually as well. Specifically, the choker was thought to protect the voice and provide great speaking abilities to the wearer. The bone choker would guide the warrior to speak the truth directly from the heart.
Just some research.
Glad you enjoyed my poem
Mr. Unclassifiable Hippie:)
Have a great weekend amigo.
Ha!! So happy you dug this.
Their voice just got me in a mood.
I think I got put under a spell when writing!!!
Hippie Chic - Ha!!
Hell - I might have to try that shampoo.
I am all kinds of things.
Depending on my mood.
My closet of costumes has so many people inside.
It helps me when I am writing characters.
To get the feel of them just for a moment.
Currently I am in a Native American state of mind.
I have 3 bone chokers I wear occasionally.
The meaning of them is so awesome:
The Native American bone choker served not only to protect a warrior physically but spiritually as well. Specifically, the choker was thought to protect the voice and provide great speaking abilities to the wearer. The bone choker would guide the warrior to speak the truth directly from the heart.
Just some research.
Glad you enjoyed my poem
Mr. Unclassifiable Hippie:)
Have a great weekend amigo.
Re. Rapmonize
4th Mar 2022 10:44am
Re: Re. Rapmonize
5th Mar 2022 8:03pm
Why thank you LilD:)
To me it is amazing how sound can also influence
vivid pictures and feelings. Hell - even enhance moods
in a way.
Now I am working on a poem titled
Graffiti Electricity.
Super duper excited. Got that buzzz!!!
Later chica:)
Thanks for stopping by and the RL!!!
To me it is amazing how sound can also influence
vivid pictures and feelings. Hell - even enhance moods
in a way.
Now I am working on a poem titled
Graffiti Electricity.
Super duper excited. Got that buzzz!!!
Later chica:)
Thanks for stopping by and the RL!!!
Re. Rapmonize
5th Mar 2022 00:30am
Adelphina rap
You've created a real style you can call your own
I dig it
BIG LIKE
You've created a real style you can call your own
I dig it
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Rapmonize
5th Mar 2022 8:07pm
Hey PS:)
So happy to see you today on my page:)
Hahahah. Yes, I sure the fuck did. LOL
In all seriousness, Just something that came to
me while writing. I had this originally titled Seduced.
It just sounded uueehh. Needed more pizazz so I
merged what I thought the album sounded like.
Hope all is going well for you amigo!!
Thanks for stopping by and an RL too.
My lucky Saturday!!
Woop Woop!!!
So happy to see you today on my page:)
Hahahah. Yes, I sure the fuck did. LOL
In all seriousness, Just something that came to
me while writing. I had this originally titled Seduced.
It just sounded uueehh. Needed more pizazz so I
merged what I thought the album sounded like.
Hope all is going well for you amigo!!
Thanks for stopping by and an RL too.
My lucky Saturday!!
Woop Woop!!!
Re. Rapmonize
6th Mar 2022 7:37am
I make up words all the time, especially in my creative writing. I'm being creative!
So bravo to you for your go-for-it bravery!
There are several stunning sentences in this piece. Very creative throughout.
It's awesome!
So bravo to you for your go-for-it bravery!
There are several stunning sentences in this piece. Very creative throughout.
It's awesome!
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Re: Re. Rapmonize
7th Mar 2022 1:13am
Hello Styx:)
So glad you enjoyed this. Love creative writing. All forms of writing.
Songs, poems, monologues. screenplays, all that shtuff. LOL
Hate punctuation though!!! I can make a run on sentence into an artform. hahaha
Brave - man I am trying. I still feel that moment of panic before I push that submit button.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amigo.
Hope you had a great weekend!
So glad you enjoyed this. Love creative writing. All forms of writing.
Songs, poems, monologues. screenplays, all that shtuff. LOL
Hate punctuation though!!! I can make a run on sentence into an artform. hahaha
Brave - man I am trying. I still feel that moment of panic before I push that submit button.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amigo.
Hope you had a great weekend!
Re. Rapmonize
7th Mar 2022 10:07am
Re: Re. Rapmonize
8th Mar 2022 3:29am
hahahaha:)
Hey R,
So glad I got a wowie!!
Too funny.
One day I am going Maui and swimming with the dolphins!!!
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amigo:)
Hey R,
So glad I got a wowie!!
Too funny.
One day I am going Maui and swimming with the dolphins!!!
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amigo:)