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Senryu: Triptych, Myth of Permanence
Endless trails end
firmest of foundations fail
savor each moment
Eternal bonds break
are fornever to abide
memories treasured
Cherished for a time
very much alive we part
how now great spirit?
firmest of foundations fail
savor each moment
Eternal bonds break
are fornever to abide
memories treasured
Cherished for a time
very much alive we part
how now great spirit?
Published 2nd Mar 2022
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7th Mar 2022 11:46am
7th Mar 2022 12:12pm
Amen, Lost Viking
I am grateful for the read and comment. I am thrilled that you were touched by the piece.
I am grateful for the read and comment. I am thrilled that you were touched by the piece.
12th Mar 2022 2:55am
Dear GW,
Sadness presented so gracefully. Loss and a cosmic shift in living situation can be so unsettling at the start. I’m really sorry for the sorrowful topic and hope in time, things will be brighter and adorned with new hope and love.
H🌷
Sadness presented so gracefully. Loss and a cosmic shift in living situation can be so unsettling at the start. I’m really sorry for the sorrowful topic and hope in time, things will be brighter and adorned with new hope and love.
H🌷
15th Mar 2022 10:29am
Thank you so much, Honoria🌹
What a beautiful comment. You help to renew my confidence that all will be okay.
What a beautiful comment. You help to renew my confidence that all will be okay.
