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Consciente/Aware
Te busqué en los verbos
y te encontré en las mentirás
Nunca te ví a ciegas
pero aun con los ojos abiertos
y a sabiendas que me ibas a doler
no cerré la puerta.
3-14-2019
Poetisa María de Jesús
I looked for you in the verbs
and I found you in the lies
I never saw you blindly
but even with my eyes open
and knowing that you were going to hurt,
I didn't close the door.
Published 2nd Mar 2022
Author's Note
Actions speak louder than words
Las acciones son más fuertes que las palabras
Las acciones son más fuertes que las palabras
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2nd Mar 2022 5:24pm
There has to be a positive to be disappointed, love, expectation and so on. Love is is a positive force but it's a gamble and the odds aren't in our favor. But we as a caring being we take this chance over and over like a roll at the dice. Yes disappointed each time that we don't hit that lucky number. This is short but beautiful Lady, tight work
2nd Mar 2022 5:30pm
Yes, I agree. Love is a gamble. I’m not a gambler. Having said that I have tried my luck. I haven’t been fortunate but I don’t regret it.
2nd Mar 2022 5:35pm
Never regret taking a chance at love. If it was abusive regret getting involved with the person but never believing in love
2nd Mar 2022 5:46pm
I agree with you. I am at my last attempt. If this doesn’t work out I will focus on something else. I know people believe love is ageless but I’m getting too old for this.
2nd Mar 2022 6:22pm
Hahaha, we are energy, timeless, and love makes us positive energy. There is no such thing except within the human psyche of to old for love
2nd Mar 2022 6:58pm
