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Lobotomize me
Living a lie
Wondering why
I even try.
LET ME DIE
"no its a crime"
"We will lock you up" they cried
"Don't make us use the ties!"
"To your legs, to your arms!"
I cry "your all in the wrong!"
YOUR PILLS MAKE MY MIND A FOG!!
Forcing life id rather be lobotomized!
Right though the eye
You bastards let me die!
Forcing me to live
The irony of this crime
I'm staring though ardent eyes
Screaming from the inside
Give me death or lobotomy!!
Wondering why
I even try.
LET ME DIE
"no its a crime"
"We will lock you up" they cried
"Don't make us use the ties!"
"To your legs, to your arms!"
I cry "your all in the wrong!"
YOUR PILLS MAKE MY MIND A FOG!!
Forcing life id rather be lobotomized!
Right though the eye
You bastards let me die!
Forcing me to live
The irony of this crime
I'm staring though ardent eyes
Screaming from the inside
Give me death or lobotomy!!
Published 23rd Feb 2022
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23rd Feb 2022 9:42am
Aaah A
What a dark deep lovely but sad poem. Its so strong and powerful, I love this poem and how you write. if it weren't so sad, it would be erotic, all those ties, the possibility of a straightjacket makes me weak 😊
Well done my friend, great poem
Love n peace
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What a dark deep lovely but sad poem. Its so strong and powerful, I love this poem and how you write. if it weren't so sad, it would be erotic, all those ties, the possibility of a straightjacket makes me weak 😊
Well done my friend, great poem
Love n peace
💜💜💜🙏🙏
26th Feb 2022 4:57am
Omg well I do hope my possible sir and miss reads that idea when they happen across this poem lol
Please sir and miss I don't mind restraints lol oh God thanks girl ur gonna get me a lovely smack down hahahaha
Please sir and miss I don't mind restraints lol oh God thanks girl ur gonna get me a lovely smack down hahahaha
23rd Feb 2022 1:49pm
It saddens me when people are sad or crying because of my writing
But also happy cause u feel what I feel as I write .
I do not edit I do not plan or change words every peice is a one take peice
I have a strong imposter syndrome feeling when I read these or people compliment them cause im amazed as you all are too that I wrote these. I.. write sometimes dozens a day. Everyday 1 to unlimited idk how but what I cant speak what I hide from everyone in the darkness part of my mind. Escapes via the pen and here is the real me. This is me this is who I am what I am ...and it scares me . My writing scares me so badly
But also happy cause u feel what I feel as I write .
I do not edit I do not plan or change words every peice is a one take peice
I have a strong imposter syndrome feeling when I read these or people compliment them cause im amazed as you all are too that I wrote these. I.. write sometimes dozens a day. Everyday 1 to unlimited idk how but what I cant speak what I hide from everyone in the darkness part of my mind. Escapes via the pen and here is the real me. This is me this is who I am what I am ...and it scares me . My writing scares me so badly
4th Mar 2022 2:41am
My writing terrifies me. But it feels so much better to get it out. Great poem!
26th Feb 2022 7:53am
I too write about how I feel about things, I don't think I'm great at writing and I'm not like you, I just can't keep writing, I need to feel to be able to write.
I understand you and how you can write so much. I'm sorry you are not in a great place right now.
Your poetry is good, and I do love reading it, no matter where my mind goes, there's no need to feel like an imposter. This is you. And it's a great way to get those feelings out.
Love n peace my friend
💜💜💜💜🙏🙏🙏
I understand you and how you can write so much. I'm sorry you are not in a great place right now.
Your poetry is good, and I do love reading it, no matter where my mind goes, there's no need to feel like an imposter. This is you. And it's a great way to get those feelings out.
Love n peace my friend
💜💜💜💜🙏🙏🙏
